Feeling Of Surrender

Shreeja By Shreeja, 6th Sep 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I tried to express a pure feeling of love which is so colorful. It has feelings of surrender and to do anything without any conditions.

Feel My Love

i can feel my heart beat
sitting in the nature's lap
it looks so pure and divine
and take me far away from world's noise
feel my love in its ambiance
when it scatter in colors of butterflies
around me
and make a rainbow to the other end
in colorful sun rays
morning dew from the leaves
falls on my lips
i merge in its sea to catch his eye
with watery grace, when i forward a step
i feel like a bloom
and naughty rain play on me like your touch
with a soundless music it force me to do dance
falling on the bed of flowers
i turn into petals and scatter in his way

Reflection Behind Me

Music in the air, it inebriate me
and its so hard to control
I look in water and make some wave
his reflection behind me
fills my heart with joy
I know
he hide himself, i can smell his scent
feeling his closeness and warmth breath
I melt like an ice, on his shadow
and surrender on his feet

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Feeling, Feelings Of Love, Love And Desire, Love Poem, Love Poetry, Reflection, Shadow

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author avatar Shreeja
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I love to write stories,poetry and articles. It is my hobby but I am not perfect in it and that is why I am here to learn more from others.

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author avatar Buzz
6th Sep 2011 (#)

So beautiful, Sheeria. So enchanting. Keep safe. Thank you.

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author avatar Shreeja
6th Sep 2011 (#)

Thanks a lot for liking this :)

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author avatar Retired
6th Sep 2011 (#)

Shreeja, you write so beautifully!

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author avatar Shreeja
7th Sep 2011 (#)

Thank you so much Brown :)

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author avatar Carol Kinsman
6th Sep 2011 (#)

Such a lovely poem, Shreeja. Thank you for sharing..

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author avatar Shreeja
7th Sep 2011 (#)

Thanks Carol, I will try to write many more :)

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author avatar juny
6th Sep 2011 (#)

Thanks for sharing..I did feel the nature :)

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author avatar Shreeja
7th Sep 2011 (#)

My pleasure, oballesansano :) Thanks

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author avatar 2bpositive
7th Sep 2011 (#)

Cold cool water
and the air we breathe
rose peddles gently floating,
and the love that they weave.
Brilliant poem with colorful imagery that is breathtaking!

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author avatar Shreeja
7th Sep 2011 (#)

:) Thanks a lot, and nice one

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author avatar Champrockx
8th Sep 2011 (#)

Yea ! as alwyz u write so beautifully ;) good one girl :D

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author avatar Shreeja
8th Sep 2011 (#)

:P thanks

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