Tin Can By Tin Can, 28th Mar 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I've had to tread lightly here. Rightly or wrongly I have attempted to put into words how one could possibly feel before, during and after fantastic lovemaking.


It's the feeling that has me reeling.
Has me streaming. Has me screaming.
It's the pleasure, I cannot measure,
That I treasure while I leisure.
It's the pain that I gain,
I sustain again and again.
It's that girth which makes it worth,
All the earth like giving birth.
It's that cock like molten rock,
Beneath my frock, that sends the shock.
It's so hard unlike lard,
I can't discard for it's long as a yard.
It's the delirium that comes from sodium,
On a podium in an aquarium.
And all the while, it's that smile,
By a mile, makes it, all worthwhile.


Aquarium, Birth, Cock, Feeling, Gain, Pain, Podium, Rock, Tin Can, Yard

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author avatar Tin Can
My poetry tend to veer towards feelings of emotion. Love. Sex. Desire. Most of my verses will reflect these sentiments as I mainly write straight from the heart. 31 Jan 15.

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author avatar WOGIAM
13th Apr 2015 (#)

You did very well, the "feelings" are magical and can be almost challenging to describe (in a good way).

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author avatar Tin Can
13th Apr 2015 (#)

Thank you for your kind comment.

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