Forward. Or At Least Onward

j.m. raymond By j.m. raymond, 1st Oct 2010 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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The future, when it becomes the present, rarely resembles the vision it presented in the past.

The Age of Aquarius has passed
into the House of the Rising Sun;
sold her diamond Future to the Past
for a cut of same ol', same ol' Fun
and the Light of her once shining stars
is now occulted
in the penumbra of Reality
leaving her unable to provide,
or perhaps, we, unable to perceive,
that golden Utopian existence
we looked for Her to disseminate.

Emanations of Illumination
with machinations
of on-marching Time and migrations
of the Aging inhabitants of that
carefree presentation of Life
now produce but a
Surrealistic Painting
devoid of the Imaginations
that pervaded a once festive Celebration.


The 60S, The Age Of Aquarius, The Good Old Days

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author avatar j.m. raymond
Satire, humor and fiction are my primary interests, although occasionally, I make forays into the worlds of technology and small business management.
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author avatar Melissa Dawn
2nd Oct 2010 (#)

Well written and a pleasure to read.

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author avatar mirage
2nd Oct 2010 (#)

I just loved your language.I do also appreciate the quality and relevance of your subject.Good job!!

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author avatar j.m. raymond
2nd Oct 2010 (#)

Thank you, Melissa. I always appreciate you stopping by.

rahman ali, welcome to wikinut and thank you for reading and the exceptionally kind words you left.

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author avatar Denise O
2nd Oct 2010 (#)

Great job. I loved how it flowed.
Plain and simple...
I enjoyed it all around.
Thank you.

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author avatar j.m. raymond
2nd Oct 2010 (#)

Thank you!

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