Fresh Hope

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 15th Jan 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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A brand new day was there...Soon, the dark nightmares would be only a very distant memory destined to get lost into the dust of time.


Suddenly, the mistakes of the past faded into nothing; a new day was almost there, ready to bring new hope where it was needed the most.
The night brought so many nightmares to the young hearts. Some of those were really scary, painting awful pictures inside the brains of the youngest ones. Most people thought there was nothing left to do. The knife-sharped darkness filled every single thing, leaving everybody blind, unable to see the beautiful light that was waiting to be found.
But among all that darkness, there was still something beautiful, a wonderful gift waiting for somebody who had enough faith to find it. Such a beautiful thing sounded quite hard to be found quickly, but the impossible happened.
With the new day, it came to light. Sweet, gentle feeling that painted smiles on the faces that used to be sad and worried about the future.
There was another beautiful chance to fix the errors of the past. The warm sunrays were singing a beautiful song that talked about forgiveness and faith in the future.
For a moment, it was safe to smile again, like the people used to do on the old times.
It was way beyond of a simple kind of forgiveness. This was real. It came from within… it was a true gift sent from high above to mend all of those broken hearts.

No matter what could happen tomorrow. The new day was almost here, and it was more than determined to restore everybody`s faith on life. Soon, the darkness would have to hide inside of a rock, far away from the people who wanted to keep on going.
The light was slowly filling the places where the darkness used to hide. Suddenly, the future looked a little less scary than before. As long as another days comes, there would be another fresh start, and one-thousand reason to keep on walking

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Hope, Life, Life Without Strife, Light, Light In Darkness, Short Fiction, Short Story, Short-Story

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar GenkiWorld
15th Jan 2015 (#)

wow beautifully written, just the thing i needed to read today to renew my motivation for the day :)

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
16th Jan 2015 (#)

I am so glad to hear it!

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author avatar Retired
1st Mar 2015 (#)

Very nice! Tomorrow is always a day of hope! Thank you for sharing.

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
1st Mar 2015 (#)

Thank you, Carmen!

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