Friday the 13th

grey By grey, 13th Aug 2010 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/9r07422l/
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Looking at a fire tree outside my window on a rainy friday the 13th.

Friday the 13th

Today is friday the 13th
it's unlucky they say
only then did i realize
it was doomed friday indeed

i wondered what could happen to me
this unlucky day
i looked out my window
and wondered

then i saw my favorite tree
that burned orange in late summer
its branches swaying with the wind
its leaves dancing unreserved

the sky was dark
the wind was cold
the rains are late
and i am still

but the leaves are glad
they are optimistic
eager for the shower
it will come soon

it's almost 10
the clock said so
class starts soon
what could possibly go wrong.

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I write to remember that not very long ago, I believed that the teru-teru bozu would keep the rain away.

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author avatar Synthaea
13th Aug 2010 (#)

Interesting. Flowing, and lovely imagery. Gorgeous tree :)

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author avatar grey
13th Aug 2010 (#)

i couldn't really think of adjectives to describe what i wrote, but you came up with 3! plus one for the tree! *unintended play of words* haha:)
thanks~

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author avatar Priyanka Bhowmick
13th Aug 2010 (#)

lovely poem... i remember the horror movie when i realized today's Friday the 13th

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author avatar grey
13th Aug 2010 (#)

ooh i haven't watched that movie. but i just watched the trailer~ hahaXD

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author avatar LOVERME
13th Aug 2010 (#)

don't ever be superstitious i say today is friday and 13 th is just another day
i was given a sumptuous meal today
wow u missed joining me just by the way
twas also 13th
for me today

LUCKY WASN'T IT??? AND FOR U??? I AM WRITING THIS POETRY WOW JUST SAY

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author avatar grey
13th Aug 2010 (#)

actually today wasn't bad for me at all~
i made it out of an oral quiz alive~! yey!XD

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author avatar Synthaea
13th Aug 2010 (#)

Lol! I swear, you're completely hilariously deranged ;)

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author avatar LOVERME
13th Aug 2010 (#)

what is the range

of my being
dereanged

see its 13th
and ur laffing

so 13 is lucy

if not lucky
????what

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author avatar grey
13th Aug 2010 (#)

somebody please tell me what's happening... hahaXD

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author avatar Synthaea
13th Aug 2010 (#)

The range of your being deranged is... long :D
I'm only joking. Just the way you say things seems quite crazy at times. But don't stop it, it's refreshing.
I wasn't saying that today wasn't a lucky day for some, merely implying that all the capital letters were RATHER EXCESSIVE :P

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author avatar grey
13th Aug 2010 (#)

goodness i thought it was just me.
but i totally agree synthaea... i mean the way loverme expresses him/herself. haha.
i fine with the all caps though.^_^

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author avatar Maria Papadopoulou
13th Aug 2010 (#)

LOL! It is more the number 13 itself that causes all that fear.

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author avatar grey
13th Aug 2010 (#)

i've never really researched on that, but what's with number 13?
i know that it's somehow related to bad luck, but that's it.

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author avatar Maria Papadopoulou
13th Aug 2010 (#)

Yeah, number 13 is considered to bring bad luck. I know people who consider it to be their lucky number though.LOL

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author avatar Synthaea
13th Aug 2010 (#)

It's something biblical, I think. Not sure. Anyway... yeah, all caps is quite good on occasion, but it was just kinda woah! Haha :P

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author avatar grey
14th Aug 2010 (#)

haha:)
seems like loverme's ok with your explanation. hahaXD

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author avatar LOVERME
15th Aug 2010 (#)

i think u like comments like
gr88888

good
keep it up
lovely
so be it
amen

crazy and perhaps derangy 2222222222222 only for uuuuuuuuuuuu rgds girl /lady

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author avatar LOVERME
15th Aug 2010 (#)

fine for me

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author avatar LOVERME
15th Aug 2010 (#)

my last comment vanished

it was dicey
derangy

perhaps
they erased it

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author avatar grey
15th Aug 2010 (#)

your comment vanished?
i swear i've got nothing to do with.0_0 *crossing heart*

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author avatar Synthaea
15th Aug 2010 (#)

Not at all, I like comments with a bit of pizzazz. The same old mild one-word compliment gets very bland very quickly. Your comments are refreshing, as I said. :)
Rdgs? :O

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author avatar grey
15th Aug 2010 (#)

it was 'rgds'...
i think it's supposed to be 'regards'.
maybe...or maybe not.

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author avatar Synthaea
16th Aug 2010 (#)

Ah, well that would make sense then ;)

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author avatar LOVERME
16th Aug 2010 (#)

i have already commented somany times
next please

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