Garden of Eden...Those who there did dwell.....

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We have all heard of the Garden of Eden and how Eve tempted Adam with an apple. Then they had to depart and the snake coiled round the tree laughing his silly head off. I think this is a metaphor of good and evil and temptation for thousands of years before the bible tells this tale the story was found in ancient Scythian scripts....enjoy anyway on Mother's day...

Waiting

Now there came a glorious sight
Garden of Eden filled with trees
Yet only one stood in supreme light
Branches spread covering all

Emerald green grew its leaves
Its trunk bronzed and golden bright
Housed a knowledge beyond all knowing
Around its bark a snake appeared

Winding sinuously round and round
Flicking its barbed tongue
Cruel its eyes yet full of guile
Waiting for Eve to appear

Starting again....

Sound reverberated everywhere
Adam his footsteps made
Still so close to Godhead he
Soon to fall

Beguiled he was
Not knowing right from wrong
Pure and innocent in every way
Such was this man upon the land

Another place he dreamed on
Where once had been before
Then closure had been made
All pulled up
To start again

Perceptions

Billions of years had come and gone
Universes wrought in image of God
As above so below
Eternal creation made it so

Sparks of translucent light
Shimmering through evolving spaces
Some slow some fast
In time what had to be

Perceptions of a varied kind
Momentarily gathering speed
Opening up vistas to see
What lay ahead

A companion

Eve opened up her eyes
Gazing into the heaven above
Saw Adam looking down at her
At last a companion come to he

He knew not what he had to do
Then Eve an apple gave to him
He looked and saw his body bare
Embarrassed he became

He clothed himself in leaves of green
And did the same for Eve
Took her by the hand
Then God called out his name

Fate...

Where are you Adam in this garden fair
Eve the one who beguiled
Whispered in his ear
If he is God then he should know

Come with me and let us leave
And find a place somewhere
Where you and I can reign in peace
Oh woman ever one to lie

The gates of Garden closed behind
They wandered far and near
Never found a place to rest their heads on
Barred all such to them

Such is the fate of all who listen to those who beguile and offer up a poisoned apple in the guise of a knowledgeable one...

and so it is....

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
11th May 2014 (#)

thank you Mark...

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
12th May 2014 (#)

Dear Carolina ..
The first Adam caused us all to be born into sin , but the second Adam , Jesus gave His life in our place so that we could be redeemed from the curse of sin .
All who believe in Him can be assured of Eternal life .
The fear of Death and the hold of Sin need have no power over us if we choose God's Amazing Grace , through His Son .
God bless you today with peace .
Stella ><

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
12th May 2014 (#)

thank you dear Stella for your knowledge and your loving...blessings..

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
12th May 2014 (#)

...Lady A .
It is about time you repented of your vendetta against Carolina ..
The Judge of all the earth reads every word as well ...and He judges justly ....
Bless you
Stella ><

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
12th May 2014 (#)

I do appreciate this so much Stella your telling that woman to stop...Godbless you and keep you safe...

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author avatar sukkran
12th May 2014 (#)

Lovely pictures and beautifully woven words. It is really a masterpiece.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
12th May 2014 (#)

thank you sukkran..greatly appreciated...

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author avatar snerfu
12th May 2014 (#)

Profound thoughts. Good articles cnwriter.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
12th May 2014 (#)

thank you snerfu...blessings...

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author avatar Denise Larkin
12th May 2014 (#)

The photos are beautiful. Lovely words.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
12th May 2014 (#)

thank you too Denise...

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
13th May 2014 (#)

Wonderful work my dear Caro!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th May 2014 (#)

thank you Fern...blessings...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
13th May 2014 (#)

Thanks for this enlightening post dear Carolina and it is always so refreshing to understand more about our beliefs. In a way, all babies are like Adam, come ever innocent but get poisoned over time due to a vicious world. Can we break this cycle? We should! siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th May 2014 (#)

well I think you and I and some others here are doing that...namaste my dear friend...

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author avatar M G Singh
14th May 2014 (#)

I would love to be there. This is one myth I Iove

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th May 2014 (#)

well go there inside your self...you can you know...

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
15th May 2014 (#)

Apples to apples, dust to dust; some opinions are worthless like junkyard car rust! Glad I missed the foulness, and to read others who support; I'm always glad to see your light from the heart!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th May 2014 (#)

yes indeed Phyl...you put it most succinctly...blessings...

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author avatar Carol
19th May 2014 (#)

You don't deserve the abuse from anyone Carolina, it's great you can get your feelings out in your work. Another vivid and empowering write.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
19th May 2014 (#)

deserve it or no dear Carol..it is still raining down from that awful person...not to worry...blessings to you

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author avatar Kingwell
1st Jun 2014 (#)

A new take on the garden of Eden myth. It is shame that was the first great error as the human body is beautiful and needs covering only as shelter from the elements. here we see what the church's teachings has done to the world.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
1st Jun 2014 (#)

yes but KIngwell...the religionists will never believe...

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