Gentle Feeling

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 7th Dec 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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It was only a feeling, but it was able to change the life of a young woman who longed for a bit of gentle light.

Just a bit of light

A gentle explosion of warm feelings,
Gives a broken life a new meaning,
Rescuing it from suddenly drowning
Into the darkness that filled its surroundings
No person saw it coming,
Lost on all the nasty humming;
But without a warning, the wonderful feeling was there;
Just roaming freely in the open-air.
It was only a small feeling, so what?
It helped to open up a heart once cut;
To let it enjoy the gentle light
That vanished the endless night.

Now, the young woman was totally free,
To be able to grow happy like a healthy tree,
Rising slowly her precious branches
Right to the sky; way beyond jealous glances.
She lost her young life in the dark,
Waiting patiently for a gentle spark
To ignite a bit of sweet happiness
Needed to fill the cruel emptiness.
But those days of pain were long gone,
Telling the young one to go on,
And never look back to the past,
To try to forget the bad even more fast.
It was finally over….
At long last, the terror was over.
The desired sunny days would be here again,
Ready to totally clean any darkness stain,
Repeating such a sweet song
Every single day, all day long,
To let her know for certain
That she would be free of any burden,
Because the notes of the song
Would help her to always stay strong.

No, her life wasn´t totally perfect,
And her soul was still wrecked…
But despite everything, there was still some hope;
Patiently hanging from a fragile rope;
She found the light desired by her heart
Leading her to the perfect place for a fresh start,
Wiping away all of her bitter tears;
Those that weakened her heart for years.
There was still a little chance…
It was still possible to advance…

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Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar Retired
8th Dec 2014 (#)

You wrote a very nice poem. It tells a great story. It's very hopeful.

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author avatar viewgreen
8th Dec 2014 (#)

Nice words and a kind of wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing this interesting article.

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
8th Dec 2014 (#)

Thank you both... I am humbled

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
9th Dec 2014 (#)

Awesome story converted into a poem, well done!

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
9th Dec 2014 (#)

Thank you, sir!

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author avatar tafmona
9th Dec 2014 (#)

wow, you wrote a very nice post

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