Gift of Rain

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 25th Oct 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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A little poem about this little gift from the nature; so blue and so clear!

Blue Dream

I really wonder now:
Can you feel the rain,
so gently caressing your skin?
See the little drops,
so pure pictures
of absolute perfection.
Every single time
rain falls down,
the living things rejoice;
feeling the soft touch
of the crystalline
drops of water.
it does look like
a beautiful dream
where the sky
and the enormous sea
become one and the same.
But this is not an illusion,
created by a dreaming heart.
This is real,
as real as the blood running
through your veins….
Can't you feel it,
clearing your mind
from any kind
of crawling darkness.
In the big cities,
where the clouds
look grey almost
every single day,
enjoying the kiss
of the rain
is something strange,
because everybody
is too busy
to even notice it.
But far away
from those big buildings,
there is still life,
little things
being grateful
for such a big gift.

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Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
29th Oct 2015 (#)

nice poem!

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30th Oct 2015 (#)


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