Gifts of Grace and Responsibility

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Again I write a piece that some will scorn ..not agree with no way! And that is fine for we all come into our own understanding as we evolve. Some are far along the path and they will know of what I write. Others still have no clue what I am on about ...they will one day....blessings to all...

Responsibilty

There comes a time in all our lives
Forgiveness we must make
Redeemed from things we did and said
Instigator of these we are ourselvesl

Many of you will blame others
Saying it is their fault
You did this and you did that
So I what I do in retaliation
Is quite alright

Not so

Responsibility we have to take
For self and others too
Responsible we are for all
In different form we may seem
But One in spirit be

Grace

Grace is extended every day
In many many different ways
Important for each one of us
To do the same

How you ask can I do this
When others do such terrible things
Perhaps for them they are not terrible
Again evolution steps in

Each one of us at different times
Evolves into a higher state
Able to accept and forgive others
For what they say and do

Reflection

A hard lesson this be
For many such as you
Caught up in ego and similar things
Think you are special
Above the crowd
Yet so very far below

Such a one oft labels me sin
What she does not know
Is that she but sees herself
In me reflected

All she does is make me smile
For every word has other meaning
And Grace opposes sin
So she keeps blessing me with grace
Though this she does not know

Gifts from above

Come walk with me
In garden of hidden mysteries
Where magic plays its soulic sound
Light covers all with brilliant glow

Hand in hand we can wander
Through mazes green now in spring
Walk the labyrinth where gifts from God
Placed are there for us to see

Not gold nor silver nor jewels
The gifts I speak of come from the heart
Loving and sharing and serving
Our fellow man

and so it is

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
11th Apr 2014 (#)

i cn/sin like this....and so it is....

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
11th Apr 2014 (#)

"Responsibility we must take.." - yes indeed. Truly a great poem is this.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
11th Apr 2014 (#)

thank you so much my friend..this comes from my heart...but you know that...light, love and blessings..

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author avatar EVANS KANINI
11th Apr 2014 (#)

This is a very good piece on the dire need of responsibility to make our lives better, and the importance of embracing the spirit of forgiveness in order to forge ahead and bury the past in the sand. Unfortunately, many people in the world keep grudges forever and are not willing to forgive. Your message is very timely. Those who do not grasp the serious themes in your special writings will do so some day. Lovely day Carolina!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
11th Apr 2014 (#)

it is indeed but so many do not know or do not wish to know...thank you..

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author avatar Md Rezaul Karim
11th Apr 2014 (#)

First thing I like to enjoy is the attached art works, then the text, to be frank... And it's stunning!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
11th Apr 2014 (#)

well am glad you enjoy Md..many thanks..

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author avatar Peter B. Giblett
11th Apr 2014 (#)

The labyrinth is always a challenge.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
11th Apr 2014 (#)

but great to walk Peter...

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
11th Apr 2014 (#)

Excellent poem as usual. However, forgiveness is sometimes difficult when the hurt caused by the other individual is severe. One would like to forgive but at times he may find it difficult to forgive. As long as one does not take revenge, it tantamount to forgiveness. I appreciate your point of view, and it is an ideal solution.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
11th Apr 2014 (#)

perhaps nothing is ideal but we can try to make it so...thank you GV..

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author avatar MarilynDavisatTIERS
12th Apr 2014 (#)

Good evening, Carolina, we have so many of the same perspectives on forgiving. I have tried these last twenty-five years in recovery to remember that I cannot expect to receive what I am unwilling to give - forgiveness. Thank you for writing this. Shared ~Marilyn

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
12th Apr 2014 (#)

thank you for sharing and for your loving caring support...

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
12th Apr 2014 (#)

We can and should bear responsibility. But by grace alone is how we get by. ;) Another nicely done.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
12th Apr 2014 (#)

thank you me darlin Phyl...love your new couch...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
13th Apr 2014 (#)

We all evolve, as we must, over time. Many in traditional societies want their children to behave like them but that is against evolution. We are a product of our circumstances and so perceive the reality differently. We should also move on especially after setbacks so as not to lose sight of what is ahead. Thought provoking Carolina - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th Apr 2014 (#)

thank you Siva....we are products as you say but we can change if we will...

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
13th Apr 2014 (#)

Beautiful post my dear Caro, you rock! XOXO

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th Apr 2014 (#)

thanks so much my dear Fern...xox

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author avatar Kingwell
25th Apr 2014 (#)

Another delightful poem that carries the message that we are all at different places in our spiritual evolution. Forgiveness is a must that all will eventually understand.

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