He Never Left (poem about how a girls love she made leave her house that never left)

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poem about a girl making her man leave cause he hurt her so bad she threw away all pictures she had of him and one day he returned one she threw in the trash she realized he never really left that he was coming home at night slept there as well .

He Never Left

that day you tore my heart in 2
i couldn't believe what you did.
i tore up all my pictures of you
cause i wanted my pain to end.

each day i lived alone telling
myself to change.
that i can get through life as
my love for you fade's.

i hug on my pillow each night
as i cry my self to sleep.
there were times id wake up happy
as if i never made you leave.

i finally realized how my life
wont be the same.
i remembered i had a picture of you
in my wallet that i haven't thrown away.

taking out your picture i looked
at your eye's.
i told myself how could you lie
to me as i started to cry.

i kissed you good bye then tore it
as i threw it in the trash.
i told myself were over now and
it's wished all i had.

week's passed as he tried coming
back he said how he never left.
i thought yeah right who is he kidding
look how long it's been.

he pulled out the picture i tore
and cried asking me why.
i told him if he had a copy as he
said no that day you threw it inside.

that means he was there that
day i woke up happy.
then left before i seen it was him
as he slept next to me.

the end

by :rebecca elizabeth pineda

Tags

He Never Left, Pictures, Ripped, Staying, Staying Up All Night, Torn Away From Love

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar Williamsji
25th Nov 2013 (#)

QUOTE
hug on my pillow each night
as i cry my self to sleep.
there were times id wake up happy
as if i never made you leave.
UNQUOTE

Your narrative poetry is your own style, Keep it up.
Regards & Love from WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
26th Nov 2013 (#)

You, Carolina and Williamsj are among my favorite poets in the forum, nice one!

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author avatar Williamsji
26th Nov 2013 (#)

Thanks, dear Fern, you too is my favorite readers, adviser and guide. Keep on commenting, I like you too..
Regards & Love from WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
26th Nov 2013 (#)

My pleasure my dear Willimasj best reagrds and wishes I embrace you!

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author avatar Williamsji
26th Nov 2013 (#)

Correction, please

Thanks, dear Fern, you too is my favorite READER , adviser and guide. Keep on commenting, I like you too..
Regards & Love from WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar poemgur1980
26th Nov 2013 (#)

thank you so much i just posted another one but sometimes it takes all day to post thank you

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author avatar Williamsji
26th Nov 2013 (#)

Thanks, You mean "ipoetree". Always there will some type of starting trouble, Soon will be rectified and made comfortable,
Regards & Love from WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar poemgur1980
26th Nov 2013 (#)

this comment was to fern

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author avatar Retired
26th Nov 2013 (#)

Excellent poemgur1 ... I feel emotion in your words ... :-)

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