"Heaven" and "Hell"

brendamarie By brendamarie, 19th Jul 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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This poem was written when I was in high school. I took a writing class. I was hoping that it would help me develop my skills. At the time I took the class, it was my dream to be a poet.

Heavenly Souls

God is made from all of the souls of the good people on earth.
The Devil is made from all of the horrible people on earth.
When we first die we are lonely ghosts waiting for our guides to come along.
Our guides take us to the realm where we belong.
We wait in hope that the Heavenly Angels come for us.
We become a part of Heaven, a bright and beautiful light.

Dragged to Hell

This does not happen for everyone.
There are those you do not become a part of the light.
They wonder into the darkness and a dragged to the bad place.
They are taking to Hell, a dark and gloomy place where
You never know, what is going on.

Are all the souls that are dragged to Hell meant to go there?
Is Hell their eternal place to be, or somehow can they break free?

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content by Brenda Marie © 2015 all right reserved
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author avatar M G Singh
19th Jul 2015 (#)

Its a lovely poem

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author avatar Retired
19th Jul 2015 (#)

When a person leaves his or her body, that person's spirit goes directly to Heaven or Hell, depending on the God he or she has chosen.

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author avatar brendamarie
19th Jul 2015 (#)

Jessica, i do not think all soul go directly where they are meant to some get stuck

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author avatar Shamarie
19th Jul 2015 (#)

Great poem!!! I love the artwork too!!!

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author avatar brendamarie
19th Jul 2015 (#)

Thank-you Shamarie

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author avatar Carol
19th Jul 2015 (#)

Fascinating poem, well done!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
19th Jul 2015 (#)

Brendamarie, thank you for sharing your poetry.

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author avatar LOVERME
20th Jul 2015 (#)

there is no heaven there is no hell all are our mental aberrations like hell

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author avatar brendamarie
8th Dec 2017 (#)

Interesting theory. i believe we are all one

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author avatar Red Smith
20th Jul 2015 (#)

like it!

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author avatar Carol Roach
20th Jul 2015 (#)

wow what a powerful poem and pic

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author avatar brendamarie
20th Jul 2015 (#)

thank you all for your comments

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
20th Jul 2015 (#)

There should be some way out of hell too as all beliefs say God is forgiving. Thanks for this lovely poem, Brendamarie - siva

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author avatar brendamarie
8th Dec 2017 (#)

There are many who believe you must go through Hell before you get to go to Heaven.

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author avatar Kingwell
22nd Jul 2015 (#)

Interesting and good poetry. Blessings.

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author avatar kanu
3rd Aug 2015 (#)

I think you lived your dream at that very moment cause this is really wonderful poem.

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author avatar brendamarie
8th Dec 2017 (#)

Thank-you so much. I am living my dream. I have several novels in the works, including one that is just poetry and short stories.

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author avatar brendamarie
8th Dec 2017 (#)

Thank-you so much. I am living my dream. I have several novels in the works, including one that is just poetry and short stories.

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author avatar LOVERME
4th Sep 2015 (#)

u didn't reply my jul comment as yet brenda
..why

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author avatar brendamarie
8th Dec 2017 (#)

I have not been on here in a very long time.

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