Hole in My Heart

jocelyn By jocelyn, 7th May 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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A bit dramatic perspective of a broken heart. But, the truth is a bit dramatic at times, isn't it?

Bleeding Heart

I close my eyes and drift away
to sleep,
Since that's the only time I can bear
to live without you,
Since you've left me I've been waiting
to wake up to reality
Thinking this is all a dream,
a nightmare
inside my head,
But I've come to realize
I'm living the nightmare
I was always afraid of,
You left me
completely
alone,
When you tell someone
you don't love them
anymore
it leaves a hole inside,
You feel like dying
would be better
than this,
Your heart is bleeding
for love to heal it,
But you're gone
forever- maybe
While I'm dying inside
never to love again.

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Alone, Bleeding, Dying, Heart, Hole, Pain, Sadness

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Very passionate about life and love...photography and writing poetry helps me display that passion.

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author avatar Rtqlate
7th May 2011 (#)

Beautiful choice of words. Right when I can relate to it the most

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author avatar jocelyn
7th May 2011 (#)

Oh thank you..sorry to hear of your broken heart but thank you, I 'm glad you can relate.

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author avatar Songbird B
7th May 2011 (#)

So well captured within these words, the pain of loss and hurt...You have a lovely style of writing, Jocelyn...

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author avatar jocelyn
7th May 2011 (#)

I really appreciate that Songbird. I'm not that creative but just write what I feel.

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author avatar Sanford
7th May 2011 (#)

Sorry to hear of a broken heart, time will heal all things. Hearts are delicate and meant to be love and cared for gently but if the love isn't sincere it's best it departs. With that being said I would like to dedicate a song to you in times of your sorrows and anyone else as your poem as well as this song will be a source of inspiration and healing to you and them http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uzitOsxKJNY

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author avatar jocelyn
7th May 2011 (#)

Yes, very true Sanford. Thank you.

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author avatar Minakshi
21st Jun 2011 (#)

nice...

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