Hot and Steamy...

Songbird B By Songbird B, 25th Feb 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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Just how erotic do you find your shower, as the mind starts to drift...? An insight into one woman's thoughts, as she prepares for the day ahead....

Hot and Steamy....Sensory Delights..

Hot and Steamy.....

Steamy, hot and moistened,
the water on my skin,
just like the touch you give me
as love making begins..
Trickling moisture from my breasts,
runs in rivulets,
downwards, ever downwards,
making thighs so wet...
Sensual, oh such delights,
my body feels it's glow,
wanting you, and needing you,
your touch on my skin so slow...
Hot, now getting hotter,
I feel the water's spray,
trickling down my naked form,
kissing, on it's way.
Such erotic images,
can be brought to mind,
taking a shower,
with thoughts of you,
burning brightly in my mind...

Photo credit; Graeme Wetherston.


Erotic, Sensual, Shower, Thoughts Of Love, Water

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author avatar Songbird B
Hi there! I am Songbird B, and I am a semi-pro female Jazz vocalist. I have a huge passion for Jazz music, and I love writing Poetry, which I have done all my life. I am very Spiritual in my beliefs, and love Photography, Music and Garden Design....I...(more)

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author avatar Melissa Dawn
27th Feb 2011 (#)

lovely. A very sensual poem very well written.

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author avatar richardpeeej
27th Feb 2011 (#)

The words of your poem are well written and very descriptive. They conjures up a very picturesque figure in my

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author avatar Carol
27th Feb 2011 (#)

Well written, full of passion.

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author avatar Denise O
27th Feb 2011 (#)

Well done. I don't think my showers will be the same after this.LOL
Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar Jerry Walch
27th Feb 2011 (#)

I love it. It sounds as if you had read something I wrote many years ago when I was just starting out as a writer. Back then the easiest genre to break into was adult fiction and that was the route I took.

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author avatar Songbird B
27th Feb 2011 (#)

Thank you Melissa, Richard ,Carol, Denise and Jerry, for all your supportive comments. As a relative newcomer, it does mean a lot to me...

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author avatar Just looking
19th Mar 2011 (#)

Phew...just off to take a cold shower:-)

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author avatar D in The Darling
20th Mar 2011 (#)

You know how to weave words.
I've just finished a glass of ice cold water. Ugh! you can imagine! Before I get lost in the wilderness of thoughts about making love, let me say; thanks for sharing.

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author avatar Songbird B
20th Mar 2011 (#)

LOL! Thank you Just looking, and Dinthedarling, you both made me laugh out loud at your comments..I am glad that you enjoyed....It certainly brightens up the way you look at the act of having a Thank you for visiting my page, I really appreciate you looking in on me....

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