I am not stupid

hestylim By hestylim, 2nd Mar 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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You may think that I am stupid..
But you are totally wrong..
I am sacrificing myself to pleasure you..
So, I give it up to you

I am not stupid

Hey, stop and look back..
You think I am stupid..
But I am not..
Look at me carefully..
Observe me..
Then you'll know..

Hey, stop and look back at me...
Observe me..
And you'll find that I am not cheated
And you'll find that I am much smarter..

Stop and look at me..
You may think that I am stupid..
But I am totally forgiving you of what you had done to me..
You may think that I am stupid..
That I give up my valuable things to you..
To you, that I could call a "jerk"..
You may think that you are success in cheating me..

And what you should know is..
You are totally wrong..
I never am as stupid as you think..
I never am as innocent as you think..
Just because of this love I have for you..
I am thinking that I am sacrificing myself to you..
I am thinking that I am forgiving you for all the bad things that you intended to do..
I am thinking that I am fulfilling your needs..
That maybe others can give..
And I am thinking..
If you still ask.. it means, that you still need it..
So I give it up to you..

You may think that I am stupid..
But you are totally wrong..
I am sacrificing myself to pleasure you..
So, I give it up to you

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Cheat, Pleasure, Poetry, Stupid

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author avatar hestylim
Author of:
- Diaries of Catherine and Carl ~ First Journal
- First Poetry Collection ~ Love Isn't
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author avatar sgkeat
4th Mar 2011 (#)

Let no one call you stupid. You are being obliging. What did you actually give up to the person? Hmm.....I wonder...

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
4th Mar 2011 (#)

Yes, It's not stupidity, I say.
You're just stupendous!

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author avatar Natalie
4th Mar 2011 (#)

'The greatest truths are the simplest'. In this complicated mundane world of ours things like simplicity, caring and affection are forgotten factors. Be proud you are still capable of giving.

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author avatar hestylim
4th Mar 2011 (#)

@sgkeat: sometimes people think that they cheated us already, but in fact, we know all their tricks, we just pretend that we dont know.. For we love them too much.. Things like that happen anyway..
The things that 'I' give up in the poetry above is the heart and the love.. The heart and the love that her love one wastes..
@rath : thx.. :)
@nat : the heart that capable to give is what I am training one.. :)

@all: thx alot to read this piece.. :) I am honored

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author avatar LOVERME
5th Mar 2011 (#)

live ur life ur way
let fools stay away
and never get distracted
is all that i can say

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author avatar hestylim
5th Mar 2011 (#)

@lovelyhoney: sure!! :)

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author avatar hestylim
5th Mar 2011 (#)

@lovelyhoney: sure!! :)

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