I cried you a river

Selriel By Selriel, 15th Oct 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/xnshh1jr/
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I often want to cry. That is the only advantage women have over men — at least they can cry. ~Jean Rhys

Cried you a river

Let tears flow
Drain every inch of tear duct
Draining every inch of me
Help me conceal,
Help me don't feel.
If this is the only way to get free.

I have drowned on my tears
And it is you who wished I have
In this life, so vulnerable and fragile
I'm alone.
I'm all alone.

You said: Stop feeling!
I heard you said start keeping.
So I'm drying up my tears
Soon I'll let go.


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Alone, Communication, Cry, Crying, Loneliness, Move On, Relationship, Sadneas, Tears

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author avatar Selriel
An accountant who is fond of writing poems.
I love being a writer, it gives us the opportunity to tell stories, to create a character, to design a situation and be God of our own writing.

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
15th Oct 2015 (#)

You are no woman but a doormat who is trying to draw sympathy for your weakness.
I have been there and have lived it. Learnt that men are boorish bastards and can be done away with as they are borne of women, fed by women and even pleasured by women to keep them alive. Now if the women are such doormats, the men will know how to take advantage of them. I am not one of them. Learnt that men in relationships are like spiteful snakes who only cheat and no tears for them, just kick them out and keep away from relationships is the best solution. ALL ARE THE SAME.

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author avatar Selriel
16th Oct 2015 (#)

Yes I strongly agree no woman is deserving to be treated like trash. Just draws sympathy for woman in pain. In fairness with the guys, not all guys are cheaters. No person is naturally born bad , sometime they behave unfavorably depends on situation. Thanks Lady, your opinion is highly appreciated.

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
15th Oct 2015 (#)

They are physically endowed creatures with no brains.

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
20th Oct 2015 (#)

Nice poem and very deep meanings in every word, cheers!

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