I wish to feel it...

Neha Dwivedi  By Neha Dwivedi , 8th Dec 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I don't really know what made me write this poetry, perhaps nature's beauty ,a lovers love or something else.

Feel

i feel like flying up in the sky
among the birds feeling the mighty hight
down deep into the river, feeling the depth
flowing through nature's beauty step by step
in the beauty of moonlight
lightining lovers in thier bright night

rose ...!!

I wish to be
a bright red rose and feel the dose
passing into a girls hands ,bringing them close
the indefinite rain , flavouring the grain
forcing them to love the stain.......

Heart..

I wish to be
a lovers heart , beating every moment as his lover knocks
blood floating through , whenever she smiles
burning every moment to say what his heart wants....
smiling through to make her feel warm......

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Dawn, Feel, Feeling, Grain, Like, Love, Moonlight, Nature, Night, Rain, River, Sky, Stain

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
Hello people ! I am a student whose aim is to become a professional writer .I love writing all kinds of stuff but what interests me the most is poetry . Hope you all enjoy my writing (Neha Dwivedi )

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author avatar Tranquilpen
17th Dec 2011 (#)

Pure unadulterated passion is what I see in the carefree choice of your words, which is off course natures way, devoid of complication, and that heart, my surname by the way is (Hartslief) or "Lover's Heart", well that fiery image is what drew me instantly to these poems. Thank you for sharing, Merry Christmas:-))X

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author avatar Tranquilpen
17th Dec 2011 (#)

Geeta, please tell me where I could get pictures like the ones you use, if you don't mind sharing, that is.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
17th Dec 2011 (#)

than you Tranquilpen... well all you need to do is Google them... :)Merry Christmas...

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author avatar Buzz
17th Dec 2011 (#)

The Universe always answers back, geeta: "Your wish is my command." Excellent wish poetry.:)

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
18th Dec 2011 (#)

thank you Buzz :)

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author avatar ppruel
19th Dec 2011 (#)

WOW! Very nice.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
19th Dec 2011 (#)

thanks...

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author avatar Songbird B
7th Jan 2012 (#)

Passionate and heart warming geeta..

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author avatar richardpeeej
18th Jan 2012 (#)

A beautiful poem geeta....thanks for sharing your innermost thoughts...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
24th Jan 2012 (#)

Spreading real feel and love. Let them sustain forever. Thanks, Geeta - siva

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author avatar shahid rehan
1st Jun 2012 (#)

hey lovely poem

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