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SaigonDeManilaStarred Page By SaigonDeManila, 15th Jan 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/jhu6n-n2/
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las, claras, y el chocolate, espeso..
(Keep things clear)
-Spanish Proverbs


Writing life here in Wikinut™ one will never run out of reason to be amused, or bemuse, annoyed or be toyed. Some will awe you at times will bore you but for good reason you can be dwelled in momentary special days, ways or for comments at times astray and come what way. You'll never know what you'll expect really, believe me you'll meet some unforgettable characters be it a resident or visitor. Today i felt a profound reason to share a not so lengthly encounter with one of our amiable member -Loverme.

Geoffrey Chaucer

Writing life here in Wikinut™ one will never run out of reason to be amused, or bemuse, annoyed or be toyed. Some will awed your at times will bore you but for good reason you can be dwelled in momentary special days, ways or for comments at times astray and come what way. You'll never know what you'll expect really, believe me you'll meet some unforgettable characters be it a resident or visitor. Today i felt saintly to share a not so lengthly encounter with our amiable member -Loverme.

Loverme "If you think am Geofrey Chaucer
Who do you thnk you are?
"

My Reply:
I did not opined you are
but hold my own to avoid your ire

I see myself as fictitious as Cervantes's Don Quixote

Now back to your "article" you considered a prose..

This is already a poem under free verse but as Samuel Coleridge said poetry is best word onits best order let me accept some nutty challenge:

(double chain senryu)
Here I see many
newer gals and guys want to
be poets at me

thinking poetry
as easy as another
Bowasaki’s view

(shape poetry)
“ if
poetry
doesn't come
to you
forget
it”

(Double Tetratys)
I
Now say
also you have
composed only ten
and run a contest what for first read as
many as you can comment on all of
them o woman
o man then
you will
see
the
depth you
can fathom
poetry is
an emotion in slower motion words
flowing in a fountain then poetry
is forgotten
it doesn't go
amiss
else-an emotion in slower motion--Where did u pick up these words?
2.then poetry will flow
like river Thames...

can u confess dearest poet of distinction
STAR EARNER TOO
hope better still u will doReply to this comment

4th Sep 2015

MY REPLY:
I can't remember exact reason
nor it can be a treason,
Probably an instant license
to seek your presence
In great affection

"I only fake it"



"...they will also never give you a star


I been around too
too many or two
but i proved some point
All else have their viewpoint
I checked the road they travelled
like you knew what unraveled
To share piece of heaven
Its an imperfect seven...
but that is the art
our own sweet tart
Artist need not to please
but share a life nothng else.
In case you felt obligated
to have fame and rewarded,
Check your ink again
will it change once you've gain?By
the
way
my 1st
10 poetry post,
the 10th got a star
My next twenty four
however landed
me seventeen
sparkles...
badges
they
do
Give for the learning curve
I followed but never really
thought changes anything
on an art above ground.

loverme But u r a poet... I only fake it,lovely creations here sai"

If you "fake" it then do not expect laurel for your "acting"..artistry is a big shoe to fit in... Aside t the best practice of adding essential to your post, i wish you to continue studying the language required here...i myself is not native speaker but it never cease me to improve my craft to ensure reading audience can appreciate it next to the discerning moderator.
-my .2 cent

Loverme ending reply:

"..lovely creations here Sai"

credits



The preceding are heartfelt mundane exchange of thoughts possibly random at first glance but actually weaved a good experience on how humanly sensitive our community to react and communicate with each other. i am sure some of yo u had better discussion thread on your own for either controversial article or whatever it maybe. Do remember however for such an innocent and purposeful writing we write, we share our mind and we'll earn a friend or foe -just be sure it'll be more than profit our soul
Saigon De Manila 2015©


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Dear friends and foes: I am a teacher, a poet, an artist, self-published author on art & poetry, CSN Life Skill coach and an international marketer.

See my archives @ edgardecastro.blogspot.co.id

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author avatar GenkiWorld
15th Jan 2015 (#)

love both poems, great job!

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author avatar SaigonDeManila
16th Jan 2015 (#)

Tyank you for appreciatng t Genki...

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