Impossible feeling

Neha Dwivedi  By Neha Dwivedi , 31st Aug 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Certain feelings can really be confusing....how much ever you try to ignore them, they tend to get back to you !

Impossible feeling

The world is moving around
like a child's dream in a merry-go-round
there is something in him attracting you
creating feelings which you have only for a few

he comes like a dew
and goes like a beautiful view
the way he sees me makes me uncomfortable
throwing me off in a state which is totally unstable

my heart aches when i see a beauty near him
making me go insane , disabling me to think
thinking of this feeling as jealousy makes me irk
surprising me at this thought, rather making me blink

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Confuse, Confused, Confusing, Confusion, Love, Love And Desire, Love At First Sight, Love Poem, Love You, Loved Ones, Lovepoem

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
Hello people ! I am a student whose aim is to become a professional writer .I love writing all kinds of stuff but what interests me the most is poetry . Hope you all enjoy my writing (Neha Dwivedi )

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author avatar jayababy
1st Sep 2011 (#)

Impossible not to like this poem, geeta dear. Well done.

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author avatar Marion Licchiello
1st Sep 2011 (#)

Very nice and I understand it totally!!!!!! Good job

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author avatar Buzz
1st Sep 2011 (#)

Very, very nice, Geeta. Thanks for sharing. Mwah!

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author avatar Socrates
1st Sep 2011 (#)

Good work Geeta.

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
1st Sep 2011 (#)

Really gret poem geeta. Loved it,

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author avatar Sheila Newton
1st Sep 2011 (#)

Oh, yes, jealousy is a tough emotion to cope with. Great poem, my friend.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
2nd Sep 2011 (#)

thank you friends for stopping by and posting your comments!

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author avatar Val Mills
3rd Sep 2011 (#)

Really enjoyed your poem

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
17th Sep 2011 (#)

thanks Val

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author avatar Carol Kinsman
5th Sep 2011 (#)

I love the honesty in your poetry. Very nice, Geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
17th Sep 2011 (#)

thanks Carol

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author avatar vpaulose
16th Sep 2011 (#)

Nice poem Geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
17th Sep 2011 (#)

thank you very much!!

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author avatar Phoenix Montoya
20th Sep 2011 (#)

Beautiful piece geeta xx

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
20th Sep 2011 (#)

thanks Phoenix..xx

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author avatar Songbird B
30th Sep 2011 (#)

Geeta, I always enjoy your work, and I love the way you also make us think with your inspired poetry..This is wonderful my friend..

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
30th Sep 2011 (#)

thanks Songbird...

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