In My Mind

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 10th Nov 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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My darling, you are in my mind,giving me sleepless nights.

Only You

The noise of a car
is heard in the distance,
breaking the clam
on the neighborhood
the dogs begin to bark,
feeling really bothered
by that strange sound.
Such a little thing
was able to suddenly disturb
a calm morning.
And I, just stand still,
trying to drown the thoughts
that keep bothering
my restless mind.
I don´t know...
Maybe you are for me,
like that noise was
for the whole neighborhood.
Maybe i should forget about you
for good, to save myself
of drowning into madness.
But I just can't forget you.
Only a faint memory
of the soft touch of your skin,
is enough for me
to get an sleepless night.
I know that
I should have let you go.
But somehow,
my little mind can't forget you,
and my heart keeps longing
for your soft touch.
Can you understand this?
Can you see what you have done to me?

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Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
10th Nov 2015 (#)

Nice poem!

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author avatar Helen Thomas
12th Nov 2015 (#)

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poetry ~ PJ Dorantes. Great read. Blessings

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
13th Nov 2015 (#)

Thank you very much for your kind comments.

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