Richard McDonald By Richard McDonald, 24th Nov 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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This poem is an abstract piece do not want to over explain it. All I will say is twofold one it’s a journey where no one knows what will happen till it happens, growth takes place in the soul of this journey. Two this is open to your interoperation what you read and feel is what you should experience enjoy and pleas share.



A journey incomplete
Inside his stomach cocoons
Inside his mind thoughts
His heart beats
All you get from him a one are hug
He is a man standing
Eyes that see
His tears filled with hurt

And so the journey continues
His stomach filled with butterflies
His mind dreams
His heart bleeds
Now you gain a full embrace
Lungs taking in air
Running past his present
His eyes hoping
His tears filled with freedom

A journey continues
His stomach settles in to a lasting promise of love
His mind turns to actions
His heart bled out and now is replaced
His arms safety for the broken
He is breathing now
He is a man escaped from the cage of his body dancing
Eyes that believe
He’s tears of joy
Hey everybody we’re on a journey its incomplete who knows wh…


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author avatar Richard McDonald
Hi I am Richard McDonald I am a poet writing to ignite embers awaken dormant passions.
Trying to write Gods heart beat to listen for His whispers and translate it on paper. Peace and Love.

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author avatar Retired
24th Nov 2014 (#)

Lovely poem. =) I enjoyed reading that.

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author avatar Richard McDonald
25th Nov 2014 (#)

wow thank you so much

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