It's easy to guess the feelings here.

Nicolaspondylus By Nicolaspondylus, 8th Aug 2010 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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There's a bit of hate deep within all of us, whether it's for a person, or for something inanimate. It's there, even in the sweetest person there's a bit of bitterness just lingering.

Bite The Silver

Did you really believe you could tear it out?
Even now you still try to spit it out.
So when you think of me I hope your shadow casts a doubt;
The kind that puts you in a penitentiary.
It’s another mystery;
Never again could I fall for such blaspheme.
You know this is no destiny.

Truth never could roll off your tongue in time.
Remember your reach fell too short.
You left my wings alight with fire.

To never bare my light must hurt you so.
Hear my heartbeat not with yours;
Every breath minus another minute.

Think not of the days that I ripped away from you.
Remember the words that strike you deep.
Innocence was never a vying factor.
Go ahead and grab the liquor again;
Grind your teeth as my bitter taste chokes you.
Enter the dismal world you created long ago.
Recall nothing but the pain you bring.

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Abstract, Bitter, Destiny, Innocence, Love, Mystery, Negative, Pain, Poem, Poetry, Trigger

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author avatar Nicolaspondylus
I'm 20. I love writing, for I am a poet and an amateur author. I'm friendly as well as honest. Just recently my life really started.

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author avatar Synthaea
8th Aug 2010 (#)

I feel sorry for her if she ever reads this. The resentment was almost palpable, and it wasn't even directed at me. ^^

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author avatar Dildo Saggins
8th Aug 2010 (#)

This poem is pathetic.

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author avatar Synthaea
8th Aug 2010 (#)

Your name and general demeanour are pathetic. Get a life, please... or rather, just die. :)

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author avatar smoothoperator
8th Aug 2010 (#)

Good choice of words and expression.

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author avatar grey
8th Aug 2010 (#)

ouch. just ouch.

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author avatar Nicolaspondylus
8th Aug 2010 (#)

Thanks for the support Synthaea. Anyways, there's a not-so-hidden message that is easy to see, which sums up the idea of the seemingly random-yet-sensible lines. Of course, some people that don't understand the way I write wouldn't see the frustration [x

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author avatar Synthaea
9th Aug 2010 (#)

...Suicidal much? :/

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author avatar Nicolaspondylus
10th Aug 2010 (#)

Huh? Oh! No! Dx I mean shoot me. Well, it could mean many things. Since the feeling here is frustration towards someone, it could mean shoot yourself, but in another sense it could mean "just shoot me". Very debatable really.

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author avatar Synthaea
10th Aug 2010 (#)

So, not literally suicidal, but rather just frustrated to the extent that having a bullet put to you would almost be relieving? D:

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author avatar Nicolaspondylus
10th Aug 2010 (#)

Hmm, well think of it this way: Russian Roulette

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author avatar Synthaea
11th Aug 2010 (#)

...there's a one in six chance of you being shot? :D
Okay, I think I'm taking this too literally now :P

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author avatar Nicolaspondylus
11th Aug 2010 (#)

Baha, let's just stop there =P

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author avatar Denise O
26th Sep 2010 (#)

Actually, when I read this, I took you out of it and added me.
Like I have told some, I am new at reading poetry and I see, what I see.
The more I read your work, the better I like it.
great job.

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