Journeying through Places Above and Below

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 13th May 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I am watching the Hobbit movie on DVD which is superb and from that came the inspiration to write this page. I did travel across the vast ocean to live in another country and I did marvel at the vast difference between them and me...so read on and enjoy!

The Journey

And when She came to this fair land
Wondered so did She
What in store did lay for Her
This time around

A journey long it had been
Across a vast expanse of sea
A great divide of cultural beingness
Thee and She


Not used to what She saw
Relationships gone astray
Black versus white
People so bold
No consideration for anyone except themselves

A Different Place

Down through caverns deep She went
Dark they were and dank
Narrow passages to circumvent
Stairs so very steep

Her eyes gave out great light
Her heart with loving glowed
Lighting the way ahead
For all who with Her strode

Meaningless

Hidden there beneath the ground
A race of dwarves did dwell
Mined they did the seams of gold
That through the earth had grown


Never saw they the blue of sky
The white clouds drifting by
Mattered it not at all to them
Their lust for gold grew more each day


Seasons came seasons went
To them of no advent
The richness of the seams
Was all life really meant

Darkness of Their Own

So many folk like dwarves they are
Living in darkness of their own
Greed like gold the only thing
That can their hearts make sing


But always come to them will She
To share the Universal Light
A paradigm of force so strong
Over time it will break down
Resistance of any shape or form


and so it will be

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The Hobbit by Tolkien

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Above, Below, Carolan Nathan, Caverns, Cnwriter, Dwarves, Gold, J R Tolkien, Journeys, Levels, Mining, She, The Hobbit

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th May 2013 (#)

thank you Peter....

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author avatar LOVERME
14th May 2013 (#)

NYCEEEE

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th May 2013 (#)

thank you love...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th May 2013 (#)

thank you too

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author avatar C.D. Moore
14th May 2013 (#)

I hope you are right cn and we are on the verge of a new age.
Beautifully done!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th May 2013 (#)

i dont know C.D. we can only do our best...namaste..

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author avatar Songbird B
14th May 2013 (#)

Inspiration is everywhere if we so choose to look and what a great poem and message this is Carolan, inspired from a movie.. Creative and well presented as always my friend\0/x

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th May 2013 (#)

yes it is...thank you so much Bev...always xox

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author avatar Delicia Powers
14th May 2013 (#)

amazing poetry ....!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th May 2013 (#)

thank you my dear friend...it is all coming from within...blessings...

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author avatar Mariah
14th May 2013 (#)

Oh I loved this, the poetry, the images the music, and the sheer magical essence of it all
Thank you my friend
Mariahx
Mariahxx

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th May 2013 (#)

it was most interesting to put down Mariah love...part of it got written as I was walking to the gym and had to dart into a supermarket to get paper to put it down on...lots of loving x

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author avatar Shirley Shuler
15th May 2013 (#)

Great poem,cn...inspiration is all around us, we just have to do more then just look and pass.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th May 2013 (#)

definitely Shirley but most are always in a big hurry...going nowhere really....

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author avatar Nicholas brown
15th May 2013 (#)

Swept away into a land far beyond the sweeping of time and engulfed in magic and awe. Thanks for taking me there!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th May 2013 (#)

oh Beloved One...we travel a very beautiful path of loving you and me into the heart of God...as others do too....namaste...

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author avatar Terry Trainor
15th May 2013 (#)

Hi cn, I have travelled far across many seas and have stayed in many lands. Then one day I watched a program on Briton it was a frosty morning I had to come home. Great write. Just thought I would throw the travel bit in.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th May 2013 (#)

thank you Terry..

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author avatar Terry Trainor
15th May 2013 (#)

Must check my spelling.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th May 2013 (#)

no problemmo!!!!

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author avatar Kingwell
15th May 2013 (#)

I believe we have entered or are on the threshold of a new age

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th May 2013 (#)

I think so too dear Kingwell...the Golden Åge...all the effluvia (physical, mental, emotional) is coming up to be swept away and the clear clean fresh water of our beingness can shine xox

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
18th May 2013 (#)

The best is yet to be - hope burns eternal as long as our hearts beat. Thanks for the light, Carolina - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th May 2013 (#)

always a pleasure dear siva...

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author avatar Retired
19th May 2013 (#)

Nice one!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
19th May 2013 (#)

thanks much dear rama...

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