Killed That Feeling - a Tale of Revenge

Shaunak By Shaunak, 31st May 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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A Story of Revenge and hatred. written in a Poetic manner.

Killed the Feeling

She was driving in a black Corolla , shooting towards his house as if racing on the highway. Her head was pounding, heart raging, unable to contain the hatred, the spite. He's broken her, shattered her and now it was her turn..
She checked her image in the rear view mirror. Perfect, she thought. Her hair was open looking as lustrously black as ever, her hazel eyes were sparked with anger and her lips wore just the right shade of red. She looked just as she had the first day they met, only that night her eyes didn't hint murder.

It was a year ago, wasn't it?

A colleague's party maybe, she couldn't remember. The moment they'd set their eyes on each other they knew that they were in love. He'd changed her world, made her see it as never before. He'd given her all that she could wish for and even more. Her life couldn't have been better, she couldn't have been happier. It was all too good to be true.

I wanna see you happy baby,
I wanna see you smile.
Just to feel your touch baby,
I could walk a thousand miles.

Nothing could go wrong, not even a scratch. It was a perfect fairytale. Well at least until last night.

What she'd seen had shattered her, broken her and killed her from the inside.
She felt suicidal, but that wouldn't help would it? He wouldn't feel a thing...

She hit the brakes. She'd reached his place. Almost three in the morning, his lights were not yet out.
She climbed up his steps and knocked on his door.
"What happened dear? Cummon in.. it's freezin out there. That dress.. reminds me.."He winked. he closed the door behind her and went to get some drinks. She came in, head bent down. He couldn't see her face.

A chill spread through the room as she sat on the couch.
"Gee it's gettin cold. Here you go." He said, handing over her drink. He sat down beside her, reached out for her.He still hadn't seen her face.
" Look at me darling." She raised her face. He looked at her and he never looked at anything again. Blood started dripping from his eyes.The Face before his eyes was not of a Beautiful woman but was of something so scary that could not be described.
"Wa.. what?"He could only utter this as he felt his flesh tearing apart as long nails started piercing into his skin. Then he felt nothing at all... Just like her who also could not feel anything after he had betrayed her. She had Killed the Feeling.


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author avatar Shaunak
Hi, i am Shaunak. I am a Technology freak who loves writing Poetry and Short stories. I also write about movies, music, business and anything that i find interesting.

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author avatar Ms. Ann
31st May 2012 (#)

you paint well with words. very good.

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author avatar tankermone
31st May 2012 (#)

Pretty awesome! Scares with your mind filling in the blanks!

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author avatar ShaneCold
1st Jun 2012 (#)

Wow! i am speechless. Excellent story! Keep it up. Love the twist in the end. Goodluck! I believe Your stories and peoms are the best on wikinut and eagerly await them. Keep Sharing such wonderful stuffs

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author avatar Sanskriti
1st Jun 2012 (#)

Wonderful and haunting story.
Thanks for sharing

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author avatar Retired
3rd Jun 2012 (#)

Awesome, thank you!

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