Lapin - A Short Poem

Gannucard By Gannucard, 5th Apr 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/lah-z9g2/
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This is a poem I just wrote today. I've always liked rabbits, so I decided to personify a person's struggle to the top as a rabbit's life, fleeting and thought-provoking! I wrote this in about 20 minutes with very little editing. Was just sharpening my speed-writing skills. I haven't written in a while, so hopefully you all like this. Enjoy!

Lapin

Little rabbit, so young and carefree.
No rules but those of nature to guide.
Soon adolescence with time will flee,
And you will find less time on your side.

Not the best roof but a roof still,
A victory when funds are not rife.
Doing well you don't have your fill
Remain proud of your job and your life.

Success can be an empty promise.
It seems good to taste, to smell, and feel.
But there's one thing that's easy to miss:
When you were young, running through that field.

Remember where you came from, lapin,
Balance your new life with the old one.

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Poem, Poem About Life, Poem On Life, Poem On Nature, Poem Poetry, Poems, Poems About Life, Poems On Emotions

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author avatar Gannucard
I am a poet who wants to share my works with the world. I'm a bit lazy, and sometimes, I may not post for awhile, but I hope to entertain my readers!

I will be posting poems on various topics!

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
6th Apr 2013 (#)

Carefree life is what we miss when success gets to our head - siva

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author avatar Gannucard
6th Apr 2013 (#)

I just want to take a minute to thank you for reading through all of my poems and commenting. You are an awesome guy!

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