Let Last This Moment

Ra'ana Khan By Ra'ana Khan, 4th Jul 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Something I wrote in a precious moment of peace capturing its essence and feelings for ever.
Leave me with my peace,
My soul at ease...

Let Last This Moment

Leave me with my peace,
My soul at ease.

It's not always,
I'm left alone,
With no thought,
just space.
So leave me be,
And let last this moment,

Leave me with my peace,
My soul at ease.

For it is not always,
I'm calm, content and demure.
At a loss of words I feel,
For the peace inside me,
In words, cannot be revealed.
so, let last this moment.

Leave me with my peace,
My soul at ease.

My spirit uplifted,
My soul detached,
Free from the love of this world,
Its glory, its everything,
Weightless, subtle, almost in flight
Thus let last this moment

Leave me with my peace,
My soul at ease.

And let me have,
This fulfilment of pleasure,
For just this moment,
In my life,
May come again, never!
Hence let last this moment

Leave me with my peace,
My soul at ease.

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Memories, Peace, Peace And Contentment, Peace And Harmony, Peace Of Mind, Poem, Timelessness

Meet the author

author avatar Ra'ana Khan
I am an artist, a calligrapher, by profession & an amateur writer. My poems mainly focus around, love, relationships, spirituality and self-improvement. I have been writing since I was in 7th grade.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
4th Jul 2012 (#)

Excellent poem.

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author avatar Ra'ana Khan
4th Jul 2012 (#)

Thank you for the appreciation

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author avatar Retired
4th Jul 2012 (#)

welcome to Wikinut Ra'ana! i can see that you've already made a marvelous start by bringing this beautiful poem to this platform...thanks for sharing and godspeed for the rest of your posts.
looking forward to your forthcoming articles!

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author avatar Ra'ana Khan
4th Jul 2012 (#)

Thank you so much Waleed for the warm welcome, the encouragement was much needed. It is always inspirational when one's writing or art is appreciated and understood. :)

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author avatar Ra'ana Khan
4th Jul 2012 (#)

ok so I need help with the commenting thing ... how can I delete my own comments and how do I correctly reply to the comment that I wish to reply to? Any idea?

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author avatar Retired
5th Jul 2012 (#)

Ra'ana you can neither delete your comments nor can you delete your posts unfortunately! That's what disturbs me about this site. You've to address the moderator for doing these acts!! thanks for asking, i believe it helps you!

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author avatar Ra'ana Khan
5th Jul 2012 (#)

That is rather peculiar, don't you think? It should be an authors right to be able to delete their work if they so wish. no?

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author avatar Retired
5th Jul 2012 (#)

that's right Ra'ana, I've been engaged in several writing sites but none of them deprives you from removing your comments/posts. This is DARKER SIDE of Wikinut. for the same reason i have to think a lot before posting either of these.

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author avatar Ra'ana Khan
5th Jul 2012 (#)

Well Waleed thanks for the heads up, I think I'll be doing the same from now on i.e. thinking twice before posting more of my writings. :)

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author avatar Retired
5th Jul 2012 (#)

These wikinut moderators need to revise their policies. To be straightforward, other writing platforms are far better than the wikinut. You don't know the views per article and your income increases in little pennies which is a real disappointment.

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author avatar Ra'ana Khan
5th Jul 2012 (#)

hmm well this is my first experience really with such writing platforms other than blogs I guess ... would you recommend some other one which is better this way?

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author avatar Retired
5th Jul 2012 (#)

I recommend you Hubpages and Squidoo. There are many writers here in wikinut that are established writers in these two sites and are living better financially. These two sites have much greater community as compared to the wikinut, and hope that you'll enjoy writing there.

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author avatar Ra'ana Khan
5th Jul 2012 (#)

Thanks Waleed for all your helpful advice. I'm surely going to look into it.

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author avatar Retired
5th Jul 2012 (#)

WOW! How absolutely stunning. This is wonderful. I hope you continue to write.

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author avatar Ra'ana Khan
5th Jul 2012 (#)

Jennyreeve your encouragement is over whelming. Thank you so much for your gracious comments. :)

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author avatar Buzz
5th Jul 2012 (#)

Welcome to Wikinut. Pleased to meet you.

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author avatar akram saqib
18th Aug 2012 (#)

your spirits are high

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author avatar Ra'ana Khan
21st Aug 2012 (#)

my Father passed away on the 27th of Ramadan. Kindly say Fateha for him and do remember me in your prayers. JazakAllah Khair

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