Life's Dawn

LOVERME By LOVERME, 29th Jun 2018 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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My Dawn you were my first love born I took you for a dance once I had my maiden chance A lost battle of love.......

My Dawn

My Dawn
you were my first love born

I took you for a dance
once I had my maiden chance

we danced remember Dawn
though the night
your parents were watching from the balcony
I wanted to kiss you
hug you
closely I nearly lipped your nose too

Remember you said
they had eagle eyes
you scared me out of my wits
then you did smile

But I lied
said yes
I know they will only wrath bestow .
I withdrew from dancing
being dangerously
too near and slow

Years into the passage of time
I now feel like a coward indeed
why did I not take a chance
just to kiss
perhaps they'd too have
admired us
my O what a miss

Well many tonnes of water
has since flowed down
now tears can't help
the time's lost wonderful
and memorable games

just recall the time gone since
but You and I have become a living entity
you in some one Else's arms
so am I

time heals they say
but my loss of that day
makes me feel like a coward
till today

But it was a risky chance for me
I was mounting a new career
the kiss could have resulted
in the end of me
just @19


Dawn, Dawn Of Fantasy, Dawn Of Summer, Dawn Of The Brave, Dawn Or Dusk, Dawn Sunriselife, Dawning

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
30th Jun 2018 (#)

I believe we get what we deserve in the end. Some walk away with a prize catch but soon find it is tough to handle.

Yes, teenage and puppy love are soon past but leave a lasting impression.

What cards we are dealt, we have to accept and make the best use of them. Regrets should not overwhelm us.

Almost all can relate with your feeling of what it could have been though - siva

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author avatar LOVERME
30th Jun 2018 (#)

WE all are swimming in familiar waters MI LORDZ
U gave each one a dealt hand of cards
each one is different
some win many lose but LIFE'S values one should not loose
I now stand near the estuary and
hope some day soon
will be swimming in the sea
like a free FISH awaiting a tadpoles SOUL
as you all say Shall meet then hopefully remember me will LORDZ


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author avatar Retired
1st Jul 2018 (#)

I have to agree with you both. LIfe is what we make of it.

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author avatar LOVERME
1st Jul 2018 (#)

thanks for all comments

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author avatar LOVERME
6th Jul 2018 (#)

806 read all my poetry
from a sine curve now
i become a SWING

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
7th Jul 2018 (#)

Wikinut was out of action for a day or more to create a perfect swing with our sine curve - siva

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author avatar LOVERME
8th Jul 2018 (#)

when a tree cannot take its load
it bends Pete's trunk must now needs rest
they must have amassed
what they wanted plus..amen

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