Life's Only a Maze Until the End of Days

2bpositive By 2bpositive, 24th Oct 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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This is a short poem reflecting on this missing puzzle in our lives. Our battles are for a purpose. A constructive purpose. And the ultimate decisive factor on whether we will succeed or not depends on how quickly we can come to terms with this reality.

Life is really A-MAZ(E)ING

Standing here alone, before me is a faceless enemy that I behold
brought into this world, hoping to affect my life as time will unfold
deeper meanings exist, to be understood only by a discerning soul
as battles rage to conquer desires, and to once again gain control

Beyond all imagination exists a world, a place where words still sing
a world which brings people together, unified in peace under a king
utopia now has a place to call home, no longer will people be at war
new hearts will be given to men, and once again, love will we restore

Night has been transformed into day, laws of nature no longer rule
hearts of the wicked have been destroyed, never again to be cruel
my tears have since dried, and the destitute once again have hope
dreams for a better life do we now hold, learning just how to cope

In the middle of the night, the moon's reflection breaks forth, what a site
the world rejuvenates, watching the sun as she reaches her new height
watching the wind blowing gently through her hair, the sun now falls
only to be reminded, my love has gone, the sun beckons with her calls

Even in our darkest hours, there is hope as we search for our own salvation
we perceiving the Light of God Amidst the Darkness, for we are His creation
never give up even if the situation becomes desperate, help is close at hand
only first we must come to acknowledge, those are our footsteps in the sand

When you find yourself at the end of your rope, you better take your cue
God has brought upon you a lesson to be learned, a lesson just for you
man will yet rise above, having the ability to change his selfish ways
only then will he find eternal peace, before reaching those final days


Challenges, Control, Death, Eternity, Faith, Fate, God, Happiness, Life Death, Poem, Poetry, Religion

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A Poet and Philosopher. Prophecy portends the future, while poetry helps make sense of the past.
Poetry with a message. Sometimes an eternal message, because this world IS the doorway to our eternity. My poetry, more than merely words on paper, is...(more)

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
24th Oct 2013 (#)

Nice post!

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author avatar writestuff
24th Oct 2013 (#)

Interesting and thought provoking post.

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
25th Oct 2013 (#)


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author avatar C.D. Moore
25th Oct 2013 (#)

I do hope with you that mankind changes its selfish ways. life on earth depends on it.

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
26th Oct 2013 (#)

Very interesting poem.

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author avatar Markthespark
19th Nov 2013 (#)

So true

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author avatar Jhon Marshall
26th Nov 2013 (#)

nice poem...

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author avatar Retired
6th Dec 2013 (#)

a well written poem

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author avatar snerfu
7th Dec 2013 (#)

tinges of sadness, good poem.good work.

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author avatar Retired
25th Dec 2013 (#)

Life really has its end and beginning

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author avatar Pollyal
4th Jan 2014 (#)

nice :)

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author avatar Ron Flowers
28th Jan 2014 (#)

This poem says so much. I will read it again and again.

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