Lonely long walk....

LOVERME By LOVERME, 20th Oct 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3escd62f/
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Lonely long walk....The last walk we all have to take alone we can maximum walk upto the cemetery or graveyard or the incinerator..

lonely long walk

lonely long walk


His having taken the lonely long walk,
all alone...
having left the pal
he once called his own...
brings tears to my eyes...

but dear Utjay..
all must find their own way...
some come early...
go late...
some come
but just can’t wait...

its life's twists and turns....
we all don't come
or go by turns...

I see in the newspapers every day...
some born in 1923 are still/yet on their way....

others who came as late as 2002 ...
have already flown away ....
that s' life we all say....

so be happy ...
he did with you play...
it must have been a long pathway...
so let him now
in his peace stay...
we all will follow
the same lonesome pathway...

so till then reconcile early...
as you may...
we all have but to walk away...

some day ...one day

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Loneliest, Loneliness, Lonely, Lonely At The Top, Lonely Child, Lonely Heart, Lonely Love, Lonely Man, Lonely Nights, Lonely Person, Lonely World

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
21st Oct 2014 (#)

Nobody can explain why some take just a fleeting glimpse our blessed place only to leave in a hurry while others linger on almost forever in the throes of death. But let us enjoy the moments, at least give it a best shot! Life and death - why, before and after we will never know. Even those sure of heaven will not be in a hurry while those like me will leave saying - whew, what a roller coaster ride, but thanks anyway! siva

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author avatar LOVERME
21st Oct 2014 (#)

and HAPPY LIBRA BIRTHDAY LORD SHIVA

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author avatar C.D. Moore
21st Oct 2014 (#)

Beautiful sad, sweet poem, Loverme.

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author avatar LOVERME
21st Oct 2014 (#)

Thank you so much we can only share Ma'am

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author avatar Utah Jay
21st Oct 2014 (#)

Thank you so much for your kind words and thoughts LOVERME, and I don't mind that he is gone, it is a blessing really, with throat cancer, he couldn't eat or speak for months on end, I just wish I could have been there to say goodbye. You have touched me Dear Sir, and I am grateful. Thanks again.

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author avatar LOVERME
21st Oct 2014 (#)

we all are with you Utjay

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
21st Oct 2014 (#)

My wife also passed away with breast caner leaving me alone. It's difficult to understand when people come or leave. Fine poem, very touching.

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author avatar LOVERME
23rd Oct 2014 (#)

the first death..
I encountered was when I was just 5
..after that I have seen at least 50 or 60 ...
may be more ..
so I know where the spear spikes
my regrets GVRR
we all have to go
alas alone..

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
28th Oct 2014 (#)

A wonderful poem to support Utah Jay, well done, loss is so painful.

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author avatar LOVERME
28th Oct 2014 (#)

thank u so much Mark.. Gordon did u read my one on
cancer patient
many across the globe have liked it

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author avatar LOVERME
23rd Sep 2019 (#)

1121 read it why didnt you
Lonely long walk....The last walk we all have to take alone we can maximum walk upto the cemetery or graveyard or the incinerator..
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lonely long walk


His having taken the lonely long walk,
all alone...
having left the pal
he once called his own...
brings tears to my eyes...

but dear Utjay..
all must find their own way...
some come early...
go late...
some come
but just can’t wait...

its life's twists and turns....
we all don't come
or go by turns...

I see in the newspapers every day...
some born in 1923 are still/yet on their way....

others who came as late as 2002 ...
have already flown away ....
that s' life we all say....

so be happy ...
he did with you play...
it must have been a long pathway...
so let him now
in his peace stay...
we all will follow
the same lonesome pathway...

so till then reconcile early...
as you may...
we all have but to walk away...

some day ...one day

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