Looking Out (For Spring)

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 18th Jun 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3rcc9jgu/
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Even when only darkness seems to be on our way, we must keep looking out for sunnier days.

Keep Going

Looking at the sky
Without feeling fear,
Wanting to fly so high,
Traveling away from here.

Fear crippled our souls,
Making them feel empty;
Punching in them deep holes
That left us feeling lonely.

Crawling kind of feeling
That devours the light
That enters from the ceiling,
Wreaking our will to fight.

We must conquer that sensation
If we want to be happy,
And forget about the desolation
That seemed to last an eternity.

The path we must walk
In order to keep fighting
It´s never a walk in the park;
Yet, it´s so exiting.

We must keep going
Against every single thing;
No matter how hard wind is blowing,
We have to keep looking out for spring.

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar brendamarie
18th Jun 2015 (#)

Lovely poem. I love reading your work.

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
18th Jun 2015 (#)

Thank you very much, brendamarie. So glad you liked it

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author avatar snerfu
19th Jun 2015 (#)

Nice poem, purpletears, makes nice reading.

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author avatar Shamarie
19th Jun 2015 (#)

Good work, purpletears! I enjoyed reading this poem! The second stanza was my favorite!

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
19th Jun 2015 (#)

Thank you guys, so glad this little poem transmitted some feelings

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