"Love and War" Chapter 8 Part 3

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Today is the day Max will be reunited with Danielle. He thought he'd lost her and she found him. They had a love that had a beginning but no ending.

Preparing to leave

Max liked to travel light so he only had one bag for the trip. Danielle had arranged for him to ride on the army supply truck. The cab was small and it would be a tight fit. Max was prepared to endure whatever was necessary to be with the woman he loved. Their lives would fit together like a puzzle that would now be complete.

Saying goodbye to dear ones

Max shut the door to his room and walked down the stairs for the last time. He put his bag by the front door and went to look for Miss Renee. He found her in the backyard with Bobby. He had a small watering can and she was showing him how to water the plants. He was trying to do such a good job. He was very intent and Max didn't want to interrupt but he couldn't leave without saying goodbye. Max stood in the background for a few minutes taking a picture in his mind. He wanted to remember Bobby and Miss Renee. Max knew he loved them both with all his heart. He felt a lump in his throat and a tear fall down his face. He cleared his throat and Miss Renee turned around to see Max standing in the shadows. He walked over and didn't say a word. He just gave her a bear hug and held on tight. Miss Renee could tell he'd been crying. When Max released her he could see tears in her eyes. She touched his heart and smiled. That gesture told Max how much she really cared for him. Max walked over by Bobby to shake his hand. When Bobby extended his hand Max bent down and picked him up and gave him a hug that he would never forget. Max put Bobby down and turned around and went back to get his bag.

Traveling a dangerous road

The roads were barely passable. Max had not realized just how bad they really were. There was deep ditches along the way. The army guys made this trip every week and he had to hand it to them because they handled the truck with ease. One wrong move and they could have been down in a ditch with no help in sight. A trip that should have taken and hour and a half took 3 hours. They did have to make some stops along the way but never the less the ride was long and somewhat dangerous. Max simply could not wait to see Danielle. He remembered the way she looked at him when she smiled. She had a twinkle in her eye that he couldn't describe but she was everything he'd ever wanted in a woman.

Arriving at the farm

The army supply truck pulled into the gravel driveway at 5:15. It had been a long ride. Max was tired but happy to be on the farm. As soon as Danielle heard the truck she ran out on the porch. Max jumped out of the truck and she ran up and leaped into his arms. He kissed her like he'd never kissed her before. It was a long sensuous kiss that stirred feelings that Max hadn't felt in a very long time. They forgot about the delivery guys who were standing next to the truck. The army guys were both looking down at the ground and feeling very uncomfortable. They didn't know what to do. Max wanted to take Danielle in the house and make passionate love to her. That would have to wait until the supplies were put away. Danielle told the guys where to put the boxes. When they were done the delivery guys wished them well and got in the truck. Max waited until they pulled out of the driveway. When he was sure they were gone Max turned to Danielle and picked her up in his arms and carried her up the steps. She leaned her head on his shoulder and kissed his neck.

To be continued

"Love and War" Chapter 1 Part 1
"Love and War" Chapter 1 Part 2
"Love and War" Chapter 1 Part 3

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Army Supply Truck, Bag, Farm, Hug, Kiss, Love, Supplies, Tears, Trip

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I'm a mother and a grandmother. I love to write and be creative. If I can make one person smile I've done what I set out to do.

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author avatar Retired
14th Apr 2015 (#)

Oooh, quite the cliffhanger! :)

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
14th Apr 2015 (#)

Thanks Jessica for following!

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
14th Apr 2015 (#)

She knows just how to weave a tale!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
14th Apr 2015 (#)

Thanks mark for the moderation, the gold star and the comment. I'm going to miss Max and Danielle when this story is over.

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author avatar Sherri Granato
15th Apr 2015 (#)

Woot, woot! Smoldering kisses is what you picture between these two lovebirds. The next chapter should really have some sizzle after all of those stolen kisses!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
15th Apr 2015 (#)

Sherri, thank you so much for following along with Max and Danielle. The last part will be really good. I'd say it will sizzle! Congratulations on your book!

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author avatar Sherri Granato
15th Apr 2015 (#)

Congrats on that electrifying gold star. It almost blinded me. Your story is wonderfully written. Fantastic job, Nancy!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
15th Apr 2015 (#)

Sherri, thank you for the wonderful comment. I do love the gold star. Electrifying is a good word. I think that's the writer in you.

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author avatar Kingwell
15th Apr 2015 (#)

Wow! So happy for them. Blessings.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
15th Apr 2015 (#)

Kingwell, my next part is the final part for this story. Now I will have to write another story with Max.

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author avatar Retired
15th Apr 2015 (#)

This is by far the best chapter in entire story till now. Nice job, keep it up.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
15th Apr 2015 (#)

Joyesh, thank you so much for reading this chapter. I do believe this is my favorite chapter too. Thank you for the wonderful comment.

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author avatar Shamarie
15th Apr 2015 (#)

Great chapter, Nancy! I am happy that Max and Danielle reunited!!!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
15th Apr 2015 (#)

Shamarie, when I read this chapter all I could think was be still my heart and I wrote it. LOL The final chapter will be coming soon. I love Max and I do believe I will have to write another story with him in it. I love true love! Smiles to you today!

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author avatar Carol Roach
16th Apr 2015 (#)

lovely reunion

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
16th Apr 2015 (#)

Carol, thank you so much for following along. I want the last part to be a real doozy so it's taking a little extra time. I'm going to miss Max so I do believe I will have to write another story with him. Smiles to you!

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author avatar Sacred remembrance
16th Apr 2015 (#)

great writing Nancy

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
16th Apr 2015 (#)

Thank you Sacred remembrance for reading and commenting on my story. This story is almost complete. There's one more part to be published. Max is one of my favorite characters and I'm going to write about him again.

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author avatar Utah Jay
22nd Apr 2015 (#)

you are the best Nancy.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
23rd Apr 2015 (#)

Utah, thanks for the awesome comment. Oh and by the way that is what I say about you! You're the best!

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
27th Apr 2015 (#)

Everyone here would like to be in the shoes of Max and Danielle - so much to live for! Great story Nancy - siva

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
27th Apr 2015 (#)

Siva, thank you so much for following along with Max. It makes me feel good to think of this story. Max survived the war and met some really good people along the way. I like all of them and then Danielle came back to him. All I can say is be still my heart. As you can see I'm a romantic to the end. Smiles and blessings to you!

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