"Max and Danielle" Chapter 2 Part 3

Nancy Czerwinski By Nancy Czerwinski, 6th May 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3x1b77c7/
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Max has been in the hospital in a coma. He has just regained consciousness with Danielle by his side. She is elated and the doctor is amazed.

Max regains consciousness

Max is awake and the doctor has examined him. The doctor reported that Max was doing remarkably well. He was smiling at Danielle. He appeared to be thinking clearly and it was amazing how alert he was. Danielle kept saying prayers of thankfulness for Max. She had prayed for his recovery and her prayers had been answered.

Leaving Intensive Care

By afternoon Max was being transferred to a semi-private room. Danielle had decided she would remain at the hospital with Max until he could travel. They would go home together. Jake had brought the items Danielle had requested from home. The nurses were so kind to her. She was able to take a shower and put clean clothes on. It felt like she had a new lease on life. The room Max was staying in had double beds and she was going to sleep on the second bed as long as nobody needed the bed. Max had lots of bumps and bruises but they would heal and he would be his old self before long. Danielle would be happy when they were both back at the farm.

Jake's visit

Jake brought news from the farm. The flood waters were receding and life was returning to almost normal on the farm. Everybody missed Max and Danielle. The dogs were moping around and Bessie the cow was refusing to eat. It would take a few days to get her back to normal. She was a hyper cow to start with and she didn't like change. Danielle told Jake that as soon as she arrived at home she'd go out to the barn and see Bessie.

Evening news

The nurse brought Max's dinner in and Danielle was happy that Max seemed to be getting back his appetite. He was actually hungry which was a really good sign. Danielle turned on the television to watch the 6 o'clock news while they had dinner. Danielle had ordered a plate of food for herself and the food didn't look too bad. The newscaster was showing the aftermath of the storm. The houses in the valley would have to be rebuilt. The houses would have to be built on higher ground. It was the only thing that made sense to Max and Danielle.

To be continued

"Max and Danielle"
"Max and Danielle" Chapter 1 Part 2

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Coma, Doctor, Farm, Hospital, Intensive Care, Storm, Valley

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
I'm a mother and a grandmother. I love to write and be creative. If I can make one person smile I've done what I set out to do.

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author avatar snerfu
7th May 2015 (#)

Whoopie! Good to see Max regaining his appetite. Bessie needs feeding though. Nothing broken for Max...hand leg...so things are going great.
It is back to life on the ranch.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
7th May 2015 (#)

Snerfu, I loved your comment as always. Thank you so much for following along with Max. I'll be glad when they are home too.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
7th May 2015 (#)

Thank you Mark for your moderation.

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author avatar brendamarie
7th May 2015 (#)

Great story, I can not wait to read what is next.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
7th May 2015 (#)

Brendamarie, thank you so much for following along with Max and Danielle. I wish blessings for you today and always!

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author avatar Carol Roach
7th May 2015 (#)

great that he is getting better or fast

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
7th May 2015 (#)

Carol, you've been with Max from the beginning and I'm so happy that you continue to follow along with Max and Danielle.

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author avatar Retired
7th May 2015 (#)

The food looks less than appetizing. Poor Max

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
7th May 2015 (#)

Jessica, I know! The food always looks like this in a hospital. Yuk! Thanks for following along.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
9th May 2015 (#)

Max is through with another ordeal and that should strengthen the bond between him and Danielle. I am echoing the words - what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Great show Nancy - siva

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
9th May 2015 (#)

Siva, thanks for the awesome comment. I think you just might be right.

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author avatar Retired
12th May 2015 (#)

Love this story.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
12th May 2015 (#)

CM, I'm so glad you like the story. Max is one of my favorite characters.

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