Miss You Boy

debdebbdebby By debdebbdebby, 1st Mar 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1patz1qf/
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hey peoples -- missed you all -- my first write since iv'e recovered -- bringing the tune back to my head.... let me know whatcha think-- this one is short but sad , got another running in my head, enjoy and thank you for your time....

Miss You Boy

Yes , I am still thinking of you
wondering whatcha been up to
Kinda miss you stopping by
I know I use to act so annoyed
but you got to know I miss you boy
You got to understand
I just couldn't give in man
You got to understand
I had to play out my hand
theres no folding
when your left holding
an ace and a joker
You got to learn
to play life
As well as you play poker..
but now the games over
looks like the jackpot's empty
looks like the players have left
now you got the table all to yourself
pull up a chair
oh God I'd do anything to have you back here
to let you know i always held you as a ace
now all the cards i hold have no face
only numbers
what a bummer
maybe you'll be home by summer....
Yes I'm still thinking of you.....
wondering whatcha been up to
kinda miss you stopping by
I know i use to act so annoyed
but you got to know I miss you boy........By Debby Glennon

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Aces, Annoyed, Empty, Holding Back, Jackpots, Jokers, Missing, Not Giving In, Wonderment

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author avatar debdebbdebby
you make me feel
like a living doll
the way you wink
and sink
yourself
right into my
pillows
your breath
has kept me wanting more
and now your
making appearances
in the middle of a nightmare
you ride on a silver horse
and rescue me
from a terr...(more)

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author avatar D in The Darling
2nd Mar 2011 (#)

How I wish I'd see your face
To tell you, you're still my ace,

Deb, you got me flowing
I've to admit that slowing
down was the right do! Coz I still feel the power of your words. Deb, that's beautiful! Tell your boy exactly how you feel. He'll be proud of you coz I am!
I'm happy that you've recovered now. I missed this!

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author avatar debdebbdebby
2nd Mar 2011 (#)

aww thanks dinthedarling---yes that would work too- but the no face cards are numbered cards and being incarcerated he's only a number......thanks so much -- now ive got a few crammed in my mind and i gotta get them out and they are 2 different ones....any advice on that one???lol-- love you 2 ---
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author avatar Denise O
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

I echo all of what D has written. Just love your writing hon, I can never get enough. Welcome back. As always, thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar debdebbdebby
4th Mar 2011 (#)

well denise you are making me blush -- your compliments are well worth the work .. hope i never dis appoint you!! muah...
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author avatar Bobby D. White
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

Very nice deb. I'll be your ace in any place. And you can best believe, I would never leave, a trace. Of hurt in your heart. Glad to have you back. Looking forward to more.

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author avatar debdebbdebby
4th Mar 2011 (#)

thank- you Bobby!! me too - hope to write many more -- your words are so sweet...
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