Misty

Terry Trainor By Terry Trainor, 29th Aug 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2xyzitdc/
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The morning’s misty it hangs on trees and there’s a bit of a chill in the air,
Sun needs to break as it’s a little bit cold drinking coffee in my outside chair,

Misty Morning

The morning’s misty it hangs on trees and there’s a bit of a chill in the air,
Sun needs to break as it’s a little bit cold drinking coffee, in my outside chair,
But I like this time of day, its quiet and peaceful when there’s no one around,
All is still it seems mystical but that’s emptiness
there’s not a single sound.

No Sense


Looking far across open fields the mist seems to get thicker, more dense,
My wife says I’m mad to sit outside at this time of day, says I have no sense,
But to me a little cold don’t hurt too much because this is my time of day,
Before I can hear the traffic in the distance, before people get up,
get out of bed, be on their way.

Peaceful



The fibers on my dressing gown catches droplets, it's starting to get a little wet,
But it’s calm, nice and peaceful as I sit outside, so I’m not going in, not just yet,
My furry friend, my dear old cat, creeps around bushes looking for a bird,
Her little soft feet touch wet morning grass very quietly,
there’s not a sound to be heard.

Tops of Trees



Over the back of my garden I can see the tops of trees just above the fog,
I remember years ago when mist was thick grey and yellow, they called it smog,
Then an orange sun begins to break through the mist it’s the start a of day,
But its far too early to inside yet, I’ll have another coffee
before all the mist goes away.

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
29th Aug 2013 (#)

I like the early misty mornings too Terry , but have to agree with your wife , it's too early to be sitting out in it for my liking . Enjoy the coffee and the mist dear friend . There is definitely more to come yet .
Many blessings to you and yours.
Stella ><

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author avatar Terry Trainor
29th Aug 2013 (#)

It will soon be the misty season my dear friend.

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author avatar Terry Trainor
29th Aug 2013 (#)

Thanks Mark

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
29th Aug 2013 (#)

Hot beverage, cool air, modest perfection. Great poem, TT!

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author avatar Terry Trainor
30th Aug 2013 (#)

Thanks Phyl

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author avatar Mariah
30th Aug 2013 (#)

You've captured that 'peaceful misty morning feeling' ..just
perfectly, lovely music to read along to..well done you my talented friend x
x

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author avatar Terry Trainor
30th Aug 2013 (#)

Thank you for reading my dear friend.

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author avatar Delicia Powers
6th Sep 2013 (#)

"not a sound"...love that!- a perfect way to describe the mist-
I could feel the chill and damp of the morn and that alone in the world feeling ...

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author avatar Terry Trainor
7th Sep 2013 (#)

Thank you Delicia beautiful comments, thank you.

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