"Molly and Milly Take A Vacation" Danger in Paradise

Nancy CzerwinskiStarred Page By Nancy Czerwinski, 15th Jul 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1scbzlf0/
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Molly and Milly are grounded and Dad is venturing out on his own. Milly is spending her time packing to go home and Molly is trying to figure out how to go undercover without Dad finding out.

Dad's going undercover alone

Dad's come up with a plan to go undercover at the beach house. He's decided to get an early start. His plan was to drive to the boardwalk and leave his car at the hotdog stand. From there he was going to walk along the beach to the house. If he went on foot he could stay undercover. He had his binoculars with him and planned to watch the house from a safe distance.

Dad changes course

Dad parked at the hotdog stand and was walking through the parking lot when someone called his name. He looked up and saw the Police captain waving to him. Dad met him half way to the carnival. The captain told Dad he'd chased one of the suspects all the way to the ticket booth and then lost him. Dad said he'd help with the search. They were going from booth to booth looking for the guy.

Molly's going back undercover

Molly had overheard Dad tell mom he was going to do surveillance at the beach house. Molly never said a word but waited till Dad left the house and then she told Milly she was going to help Dad. Milly voiced her opinion but it meant nothing to Molly. She knew Dad would need her and she would be there when the time came. She placed her water bottle around her neck and tucked her mace into her collar. She put Mom's big sun hat on and out the door she went. It was already getting hot. The sand on the beach was very warm on her paws. The water seemed choppy this morning and there was only one swimmer in the water. Molly was in a hurry because she wanted to get to the beach house before Dad. At times like this Molly wished she knew how to drive.

The path in front of the beach house

By the time Molly got to the path in front of the house she was tired and thirsty. She'd made it in record time but it had taken a lot out of her. She'd decided to stay hidden and rest for a little while. She turned around to look at the ocean while she took a sip of her water. When she turned back around she came face to face with the big guy. He had a big shiner on his eye which meant her rope trick worked and he definitely got what he deserved. He was what Molly would call a bully. He picked her up by the collar and carried her in the house. Molly was getting a little tired of this guy manhandling her.

Molly's in danger

The big guy took Molly and threw her as hard as he could on the couch. Molly had just about enough of this psychotic lunatic. She was starting to get really mad. Molly could feel her face getting red and this guy was going to pay for his aggressive behavior. Where was Dad? Molly was starting to get really worried.

To be continued...

"Molly and Milly Take A Vacation"

"Molly and Milly Take A Vacation" A Day of fun in the sun

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Beach House, Binoculars, Boardwalkk, Ocean, Police, Ticket Booth, Undercover

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
I'm a mother and a grandmother. I love to write and be creative. If I can make one person smile I've done what I set out to do.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
16th Jul 2015 (#)

Thank you so much for your moderation Steve.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
16th Jul 2015 (#)

It is now one to one between the big bad guy and Molly, a real face-off, each sizing up the other for chinks in the armor! Molly is prepared for the long haul with water bottle filled to the brim and sunglasses et al. This guy is better served if he takes to his heels!

Coming to a cliff hanging climax Nancy, thanks - siva

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
16th Jul 2015 (#)

Siva, thanks for the awesome comment. Molly has just about had it with this guy. He should know she's a force to be reckoned with after get the shiner on his eye. Molly is definitely a thinker. I wouldn't want to be him.

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
16th Jul 2015 (#)

I love the suspense Nancy..
Really gripping !!
Many blessings to you
Stella ><

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
16th Jul 2015 (#)

Stella, I'm so glad that you are continuing to follow Molly and Milly's story. I love when the last chapters have some suspense. It makes it really interesting.

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author avatar Shamarie
16th Jul 2015 (#)

I love the cliff hanger at the end, Nancy!!! I am ready to read the face off between Molly and the Big guy! Congrats on the star page!!!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
16th Jul 2015 (#)

Shamarie, thank you so much for the awesome comment. I liked the interaction between Molly and the Big guy too. This guy doesn't know what he's in for.

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author avatar Retired
17th Jul 2015 (#)

Another cliffhanger! Great reading!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
17th Jul 2015 (#)

Jessica, thank you so much for reading this chapter. I value your opinion and appreciate your comments.

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author avatar Carol Roach
20th Jul 2015 (#)

the bad guy again, when will she ever learn

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
20th Jul 2015 (#)

Thanks Carol for the comment. Molly's missions get her in trouble all the time. Sometimes I feel sorry for Dad but then again she's saved him too.

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author avatar Kingwell
29th Jul 2015 (#)

Lets hear it for Molly! Blessings.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
29th Jul 2015 (#)

Kingwell, I love your comments. You are the best!

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