"Molly the Border Collie" Chapter 2 Part 2

Nancy CzerwinskiStarred Page By Nancy Czerwinski, 17th May 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2wqt8e44/
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Dad's bound and gagged and Molly and Milly have gone for help. Molly's scared and Milly is crying and Dad is in trouble.

Dad's in trouble

Molly and Milly came flying out of the building as fast as they could. They were both scared, tired and hungry. Milly was right on Molly's tail. She didn't want to get lost downtown. What if she never saw mom again? That just made her run faster. She was running and crying at the same time. When they rounded the corner Molly saw a police car sitting near the corner. Molly stopped to think for a minute. She needed to get the officer's attention. Dad was in big trouble.

Dad's car

Molly had a plan. It wasn't a good plan but it was a plan. Molly turned around and ran all the way back to the car. Milly was right behind her. Milly had no clue why they were running back toward the bad guys. The one thing she knew for sure was that she couldn't take much more of this. Her eyes were puffy and her leg hurt. She just wanted to go home and get in bed with mom. She didn't want to be a private investigator. All she wanted to be was a house cat. How did she get in this mess anyway? If she ever got home she was never leaving again.

Molly's Plan

When they reached Dad's car Milly had to stop and catch her breath. She was standing by the car wondering what in the world Molly was doing. They couldn't fight three bad guys to save Dad. At this rate they were both going to be goners. If Molly's plan was to attack the three guys they were going to die. Milly was going to miss Dad. He was a little weird but he did give her nice treats.

Has Molly snapped

Molly jumped through Dad's window. Milly just stood by and watched from the sidewalk. She was seriously starting to question Molly's sanity. There was a good possibility that all of this had been too much for Molly and she'd just snapped. If the bad guys came out of the building right here and now they were pretty much history. Milly looked down the street and couldn't see anybody. Why did they leave the police officer that was sitting on the corner? That made no sense to Milly. She was half tempted to go back and see if he could help them.

To be continued

"Molly the Border Collie" Chapter 1 Part 3
"Molly the Border Collie Chapter 1 Part 4

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Building, Downtown, Police Car, Private Investigator, Trouble

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I'm a mother and a grandmother. I love to write and be creative. If I can make one person smile I've done what I set out to do.

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author avatar Retired
18th May 2015 (#)

Nail biting stage.......Waiting impatiently for the next episode...Don't keep me waiting...pleaseeeee

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
18th May 2015 (#)

Joyesh, thank you so much for the awesome comment. You are simply the best. Smiles to you today.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
18th May 2015 (#)

Steve, thank you so much for your moderation and for the gold star. Molly is one of my favorite characters.

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author avatar Michele starkey
18th May 2015 (#)

Hey girl, this is really a nice story for a Monday morning :) thanks for sharing it :) (anything 'dog' always brings a smile to my face! LOL)

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
18th May 2015 (#)

Michele, I'm so glad that you read my story this morning. I love writing about dogs and you love reading about dogs so I think this is why we are such good friends. Smiles to you this morning.

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author avatar Shamarie
18th May 2015 (#)

I love the action, Nancy! I cannot wait to read the next part!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
18th May 2015 (#)

Shamarie, thank you so very much for following along. I love the action too. Sometimes when I'm writing about Molly even I laugh! Smiles to you today and always.

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author avatar snerfu
18th May 2015 (#)

I am getting worried about Milly...why is her eyes puffy? And the poor thing is limping!
Good thing Molly got through and jumped inside.
I cannot think what will happen ha ha.
Nice twist there Nancy.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
18th May 2015 (#)

Thank you Snerfu for following along. I'm here to entertain and I hope that I'm entertaining you my friend. Milly has allergies and that's why her eyes are puffy and she needs her allergy medicine that is at home. Hopefully her limp is nothing serious. At this point Milly thanks Molly is crazy. LOL

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author avatar snerfu
18th May 2015 (#)

Yes now I remember...her allergy. Even I think Molly has overreached herself if she thinks she can drive the car???!!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
18th May 2015 (#)

Oh my goodness Snerfu you my friend are priceless! I love the way you think. Driving the car would be a definite stretch for even Molly who does have a sixth sense! LOL

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author avatar Retired
18th May 2015 (#)

This is such a nice, family story! It is a great story for the family channel.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
18th May 2015 (#)

CM, thank you so much for the wonderful comment. As I've said many times before I love Molly and I think Milly is becoming a favorite too. Smiles to you!

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author avatar Retired
18th May 2015 (#)

Another terrific piece. Keep up the good work!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
18th May 2015 (#)

Jessica, thank you so much for following along. You are the best!

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author avatar Kingwell
18th May 2015 (#)

Molly has a plan- let's see what happens! Blessings.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
18th May 2015 (#)

Thanks Kingwell, for following along with Molly and Milly. Molly's smart but I'm starting to see that Milly is developing her sense of what is right and what is wrong. Blessings.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
19th May 2015 (#)

This is exciting and attracting the right attention Nancy. I am happy to read again comment from Michele Starkey. I go back to good old days!

I do not know who is getting more sympathy - Dad or Milly or Molly - please save all three! siva

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
19th May 2015 (#)

Siva, thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I miss the old days too and I'm very thankful for them because without the old days I wouldn't have met all my dear friends and you and Michele are right at the top of my list. We are friends on facebook so I can keep in touch with her. She just got a new dog. It's a happy time for her. Smiles to you today and always.

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author avatar Carol Roach
20th May 2015 (#)

I read this one out of sequence, drat!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
20th May 2015 (#)

Carol, thanks for reading the chapter even if it was out of sequence. Molly is always fun to read about.

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