Mother in law ?

juny By juny, 17th Sep 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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The woman judge for being a mother and the love she give.

Mother in law

She carried me for nine months,
She risks her life to let me see the sunlight.
She smiled the moment she heard me cry,
She cried when I giggle and laugh for the first time.

She suffered same pain when I am not well,
She cannot sleep till I am awake.
She never leaves my side praying and in tears,
Wishing to redeemed my sickness and find her breath when I am out of danger.

She is my guide from small steps, to bigger leap.
She caresses every bruises and even my heartache.
She celebrated my success and appreciates when I failed,
And never stops pushing me to reach my dreams.

She smiled when I was born,
She managed to smile the day I leave her side.
She held me in her chest when she breastfeed,
She hugs me tight and watched me face, a new life’s phase.

She is the only person who knows me since birth.
She is the first woman who sees me naked and all,
She is the girl who loves me first, now and till the end,
She is my mother, who gave me life, to meet you in this life.

A rival or a monster?

Some mother looks like a rival to their daughter’s in-law, or a monster to their son’s in-law.
Whatever you, they, he, she thinks of their in-laws, one thing is for sure.
This monster or rival is the one who gave life to your husband/wife.
This woman risk her life to give your husband/wife a life.


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author avatar juny
I am your simple neighbor who lives next door,also loves to write short poem.
A music addict and a hopeless romantic who believes that love is like a fairy tale.


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author avatar Retired
18th Sep 2011 (#)

Such a lovely poem dedicated to Mother, the creator. I believe in spirituality and religion as well but I don't have power to prove that a particular god rules in the world. Practically the ones who have created is our parents and Mother has a very special position in our life. In our culture we give the godly reverence to them. Two years back I had to lose my mother at the age of 59 and her untimely demise gave us so much pain that it has still affected us. Your words once again helped me to recall those beautiful moments that I spent with her.

Mother is always on the top of the world.

Lets keep in touch and exchange our experiences. I'd be happy to get feedback for my poems and upcoming articles from you. Lets strengthen our friendship and writing skills.


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author avatar Carol
18th Sep 2011 (#)

Yes our mother gave us life, and then we pass it on to our children. Our mother in law gave her son life, our partner, so she is bound to feel threatened when he takes a partner. My son is single, but if he did find the right person, I would be over the moon for him because all I want is his happiness.

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author avatar Delicia Powers
18th Sep 2011 (#)

Lovely tribute...

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author avatar vpaulose
23rd Apr 2012 (#)

Lovely Juny. Thank you.

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