My Dawn

richardpeeej By richardpeeej, 18th Jan 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1mqjl_9e/
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Dawn can be a very special time of day for some of us, when we arouse our bodies from our sleep ready to face another day. How much we appreciate the sun, and depend upon its light for our well being. Hoping it will be there for many many years to come.....

My Dawn

Take me to a place where the sun will shine,
And I will show you there my Dawn.
For she, will guide you on your way,
And brighten up your darkest morn.


Her glow enshrouds us from the cold,
She is there for us all to see.
A vision of loveliness in our lives,
Such a joy for you and me.

As a fantasy that you can not touch,
She fades as the day goes by,
In the evening light, she rests her head,
On the pillow of eternal sky.

Her abode, so high in the heavenly air,
Is a place that is far from here,
But in our hearts she will always stay
We will love her for ever more.

richardpeeej Jan 2011

judy tzuke stay with me till dawn:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nDLfNkwLr1U

image credit Dan http://www.freedigitalphotos.net/images/view_photog.php?photogid=587

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Bright, Dark, Dawn, Heaven, Light, Love, Pillow, Poem, Richardpeeej, Sky

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I enjoy playing the guitar, gardening, writing poems, doing a bit of cooking and catching up with my good friends on the net

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author avatar Denise O
18th Jan 2012 (#)

Well I will never look at the sun in the same way. Just lovely Richard. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar richardpeeej
18th Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you Denise I always welcome your visit to my page and your very encouraging words...

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author avatar ppruel
18th Jan 2012 (#)

I loved your descriptions. Of course the whole poem. Nice.

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author avatar krrymarie
18th Jan 2012 (#)

lovely poem, I love the sunset and sun rise but will now look at it differently.

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author avatar richardpeeej
18th Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you for your kind words Paul...
Thank you too Kerry for your loyal support and for getting me started on Wikinut in the first place..I so enjoy it on here....

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author avatar Songbird B
18th Jan 2012 (#)

Oh Richard, this is so lovely and I see that you have added a video link to tie in with it too! What a glorious poem to the beginning of the day..Loved this and I love your work too my dear friend..\0/xxx

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author avatar Richard
20th Jan 2012 (#)

Glad you enjoyed the tune Bev my friend

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author avatar krrymarie
18th Jan 2012 (#)

You are welcome richard i like it better here than triond to be honest.

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author avatar Sheila Newton
18th Jan 2012 (#)

Oh Richard - what a superb poem. And what a talent you are too.

Thanks for your visit to my pages - keep calling in???

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author avatar Buzz
19th Jan 2012 (#)

Hi, rich, wonderful piece. I'm sharing this on my FB. Yay!

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author avatar Delicia Powers
19th Jan 2012 (#)

Dawn and dusk whole a very special place in my heart as this lovely poem of yours does my friend... beautifully done Richard!

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
19th Jan 2012 (#)

Cannot imagine a day without our sun. I admit though, sometimes, I have felt it could be more benign, little realising it has own reasons for its various hues. In our rush through life, we hardly pause and appreciate our blessings. Thanks Richard, for a sweet poem in praise of our dear sun on whom our whole life depends! siva

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author avatar richardpeeej
20th Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you all for your loyal support to my pages, I am deeply indebted to all of you, and really appreciate your constant encouragement...

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author avatar Val Mills
21st Jan 2012 (#)

This is so beautiful, really strong images for me. Really enjoyed reading this, thank you.

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author avatar richardpeeej
21st Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you so much for your lovely words Val and for visiting my page..

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author avatar Carol
21st Jan 2012 (#)

A beautiful poem Richard.I love dawn too, such a new and fresh time of the day

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author avatar richardpeeej
22nd Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you so much Carol, it is always great to hear from you..

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author avatar Retired
23rd Jan 2012 (#)

Lovely....

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author avatar richardpeeej
23rd Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you so much rama my friend...

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author avatar jennyjofay
4th Feb 2012 (#)

very lovely poem. I hope the sun sticks around. Hoping the world doesn't end this year.

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author avatar richardpeeej
4th Feb 2012 (#)

Thank you so much Jenny for your lovely comment and for visiting my page ....

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