My First Poem/ Song

Ssj4justdale By Ssj4justdale, 6th Jun 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3811avz8/
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My first attempt at poetry. It's my first poem/ song.

One More Chance

Drowned by tears of a broken heart
Thought I would fall apart
The words you came and said to me
Are nothing more than memories

So why do I get up and try again
When you say "No, you must go..
Away from me"

Drowned by tears of a broken heart
Thought I would fall apart
The words you came and said to me
Are nothing more than memories

So why won't you get with me one last time
Just one more chance please, just last chance
And if you say "No," then I will go
Away from you

Lost inside this broken mind
Thought I would never find true love
But then you came and been a friend
I just thought life would end

I was blinded by obsessions
I just caused incenses
And when you came, she was gone
I just felt something wrong
You were mine and I was glad
I just want to get you back

Tags

Chance, Love And Desire, Love And Soul, Love Poem, Love Poetry, Lovely, More, One

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author avatar Ssj4justdale
My name is Dale Beckstrom and I am a coder on BYOND. I go by Ssj4justdale on Xbox as well as BYOND. My twitter username is @DementedSoul__

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
6th Jun 2011 (#)

Very, very nice first poem. ss/4justdale. Congratulations, and keep 'em coming

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author avatar Ssj4justdale
7th Jun 2011 (#)

Thanks :)

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