My Love For you Will Never Wax Cold

Funom MakamaStarred Page By Funom Makama, 21st Feb 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2kt8bzsf/
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I have been writing lots of Love articles and I will still write more and during the course of my reading, research and preparations for publications of these Love articles, I have been gathering some ideas, then finally, I got a wonderful inspiration to write a Poem and all the ideas just fit in perfectly into the Poem. I hope you enjoy this!

Introduction!

The Last Poem I wrote was somewhat in a conversation form, where the gentlemen recited and then the ladies replied, you can check it out here. It is simply a One straight Poem and a single conversation. I took up this idea again, but this time I made it in a conversation form of three complete conversations and one incomplete (in which the Man rounded up the communication).

It was intended that way so that we the Men will use this opportunity to appreciate the ladies more. Another point here is, I made it a guy-lady conversation in which they proclaim their love for each other and reply each conversation in awe. The use of Materialistic beauty, spiced with Nature at its finest is especially portrayed here to really express each other's feelings. Women's conversation will be in bold. So, I hope you enjoy it!

The Lily among Thorns

I remain blind to the world but you.
The Lily among Thorns
and the perfect work of a craftsman's hand.
Giving usefulness to my Banquet Hall
and injecting Life into my green Vineyard.

Oh dear! My darling Gentle Lion.
Radiant and ruddy, unique as a Gazelle.
A mound of Wheat encircled by Lilies.
More attracting than Rods of Gold set with Chrysolite.
Yet, proven to be the Noblest of all Men
and still glued to me like two halves of a Pomegranate.

Where more would my hear go?

My Precious among Maidens,
your royal tapesty, which its tresses,
hold Kings in captivity.
Even the Towers of Damascus filled with Pillars of Marble
are not as prestigious as the comfort of our bed
which pours out the freshness and purity of the countryside
and always placing the Banner of Love over me.

You are my much needed raisin when I am weak,
My satisfaction and my Pride, like the house of cedars
and like Polished Ivory decorated with Sapphires.
More glorified than the woods of Lebanon,
perfumed with myrrh and incense.
Where more would my Heart go?
When it is locked in the Cage of Your Love.

The sparkles from your Robe!

My Angel!
Please don't speak of the fragrance of a perfume
because not even the Saffron nor the Calamus,
nor the Cinnamon or other incense Trees,
together can match the Lattice nature of your breath.

My Heart beat!
Is it the Aloes and mandrakes?
Or the finest spices from Asia?
Is it sweet Herbs from the Merchant of the East?
Together when combined to the sparkles of your Robe
are like little foxes standing near a Tiger.

Spreads like Columns of Smoke

Your beauty adds quality to earrings of Diamond.
It is washed in Milk and Mounted like Jewels,
spreads like columns of Smoke
and like a rounded Goblet that never lacks blended wine.
What more am I searching for?
When your Lips have the taste of every delicacy
renewing our bond like cool-chilling Soda
keeping us steadfast in an unshakable Anchor
because My Love for you will never Wax cold.

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Banquet Hall, Cedars, Chrysolite, Craftsman, Damascus, Fragrance, Gazelle, Incense, Ivory, Lebanon, Lily, Perfume, Pillars Of Marble, Pomegranate, Raisin, Sapphires, Vineyard

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author avatar Funom Makama
A medical Practitioner and a passionate writer. A proud published Author of 2 books, more than 2,000 articles online and 500 Poems!
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author avatar Aliu Oluwapelumi
21st Feb 2012 (#)

Fantastic poem from a rich mind.

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author avatar Ivyevelyn, R.S.A.
21st Feb 2012 (#)

I read this as a lyric poem; the language of love.
Impressive used of words and I congratulate you as I read this poem several times to fully appreciate it. Thank you,
Funom.

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author avatar Funom Makama
21st Feb 2012 (#)

Thank you my Oga-Pelumi... I really appreciate it.

Ivy, thanks for ur encouraging words..

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author avatar jayababy
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

Great Share. Well deserved star page.

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author avatar Funom Makama
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

thanks a lot Jayababy!

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author avatar Lambasted
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

WoooW!!! My heart melts after reading through

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author avatar Funom Makama
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

really?

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author avatar Lambasted
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

yeah, absolutely.

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author avatar Funom Makama
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

thanks friend!

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author avatar Lambasted
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

you are most welcome.

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author avatar pretty_writer
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

Where did you get the inspiration to write something like this? God! your talent in Poems is really overwhelming. I read one of your post (comment) that you have two ideas/stories you want to make a script? Trust me!~~~ You will excel if you do, we cant wait.

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author avatar Funom Makama
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

Thanks! We?

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author avatar pretty_writer
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

hahahaha! Come on! dont be naughty..... You want to react just like me?

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author avatar Funom Makama
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

Yeah, it is good to be naught once in a while.

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author avatar pretty_writer
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

Ok! Yes, I and some of your followers and soon to be fans

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author avatar Funom Makama
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

awww! thanks

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author avatar pretty_writer
22nd Feb 2012 (#)

you are most welcome.

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author avatar Delicia Powers
23rd Feb 2012 (#)

Beautiful page and poem, lovely...

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author avatar Funom Makama
23rd Feb 2012 (#)

Thanks Delicia Powers.

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
23rd Feb 2012 (#)

For the Lily Stand high above the rest,
Looking downwards, humble yet blest.
For through the thorns it grew to become,
The Eternal Flower humble in form.

The Flower of Mary that is what its called,
Stood its ground while all others stalled.
For she stood drooping while the tempest tossed,
And realised she won when she though all was lost.

For her humilty was the one that caught tide,
Her love for all she never did hide.
Stood her ground while rumours spread,
It filled them all with pain and dread.

For her fragrance was just too strong,
It spread all over just all day and night long.
Creating a ripple and then a wave,
With a humble look the Creator gave.

For no one could ever tell the the One,
Who did just everything under the sun.
Until it rose above the brambles and thorn,
To show the world that she stood up alone.

For amidst the thorns she pushed out,
The greatest of lives that lived beyond doubt.
Creating intricate frills that left a void,
For it was the Golden Boy who had now lied.

For the Angel finally came to help,
Dressed in a dress and fed on kelp.
While they ravaged the sodden soul,
They took everything and sealed it whole.

For that is when all of them bit the lip,
For they all based the story on finger tip.
For her diamond shone brighter than before,
As she rose up and beyond beloved music score.

By Anisha Achankunju (Lady Aiyanna, the one and only) 24th February 2012

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author avatar Funom Makama
23rd Feb 2012 (#)

thanks for this magnificent piece.

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
23rd Feb 2012 (#)

Love should always wax never wane, if you are using the moon as a comparative study....
Waxing gives a full moon and waning brings about darkness. ...

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author avatar Gracious Grace
24th Feb 2012 (#)

awwwwwww.......this is sweet. i like it.

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author avatar Priscilla elisha
24th Feb 2012 (#)

i felt so loved nd cared 4 after reading this one...........seriously i lyk....especially.....What more am I searching for?
When your Lips have the taste of every delicacy
renewing our bond like cool-chilling Soda
keeping us steadfast in an unshakable Anchor
because My Love for you will never Wax cold.

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author avatar Funom Makama
24th Feb 2012 (#)

Woow!~~~ I am also in Love...

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author avatar Elove Poetry
26th Feb 2012 (#)

flying without wings

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author avatar Barine Nakwaasah
2nd Mar 2012 (#)

You are so good. Keep this up!

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author avatar Funom Makama
2nd Mar 2012 (#)

thanks and welcome to wikinut.
@ Elove Poetry~~~ Thanks a lot.

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author avatar Retired
9th Apr 2012 (#)

This is very good, I am impressed.

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author avatar Funom Makama
10th Apr 2012 (#)

thanks a lot Jennyreeve.

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author avatar Mr. Anonymous
10th Apr 2012 (#)

Dr. Funom, I am not surprised on how you are excelling in Poems. But baffles me is not enlisting one of your free-style poems here on wikinut. I have gone through all your poems and it is not here. So I took my time to write it down. When you read it, I know you will remember. We were in Belarus the time you free styled it and then I videod it. I just copied the poem word for word from the video.

ALL MY "FIRST" EXPERIENCES WITH YOU

WHEN:
I first viewed your pictures on the net, I knew I saw an Angel yet to be discovered.

I first sent you a message, my hopes of having a heavenly experience with you increased.

I first read your response, I felt so fulfilled and complete;

I first talked to you on Phone, you made me so warm, tender and calm;

I first chat with you, I realized how lucky I am to behold a rare germ and wonderful companion;

I first heard you laugh. you sounded so soft and ferminine to be real and true;

I first had a physical acquaintance with you, I was beginning to be scared of missing you;

I first hugged and held you tight, I prayed you will be mine and mine alone forever;

I first kissed you, I knew I have fallen in Love with you already;

I first missed you passionately, I swore and vowed to let nothing alter the unquenchable Love I have for you which is burning deep down inside of me.

You are my first baby, the first to mother my children, the first to make them three and the first to be with me as I watch my only 3 Pillars grow stronger in Life for Life.

I hope you acknowledge this!

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author avatar Funom Makama
10th Apr 2012 (#)

yeah bro... Thanks a lot. I totally remember. Wow! Life is good, a careless free-style is now on soft form on the internet, how awesome development is (from the digital camera now to internet).. Thank you very much bro, I am working on a script and I think you have given me some insight in editing this same poem and constructing it into a better one to be used in my play write.
Thanks once again.

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author avatar fireSofDesire
16th Apr 2012 (#)

great poem! nice job mr. funom. I love your piece.

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author avatar LadyQueen
2nd Oct 2012 (#)

I love this. Wonderful.

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author avatar Funom Makama
20th Oct 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot firesofDesire and LadyQueen

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