My Path in life

1Faithmorgan By 1Faithmorgan, 4th Jan 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/syxaz7up/
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Short poem about the path of life and being taken for granted in that path.

My Path in life

My life no longer was mine
On this planet is short time

I sat in frustration
I lay with confusion
I lay unsleeping by my man
I sat with no plan

I’m here I’m there
I’m to be everywhere
Their choices are not mine
Their expectations were not fine

I believe I made my own errors in life
I believe I have dealt with each & every piece of strife
So why, I ask myself in this time of my prime
Am I expected to stand in someone else’s firing line

Forsaken my own life Forsaken my true heart & soul
I was but one being with my own deserted path in this realm
No more I will take, with my love, my heart, my soul
I will take back my path and not, again ever, travel another’s

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Confusion, Destination, Destiny, Frustration, Love, Poem, Poem About Life, Poetry, Poetry On Life, Poetry With Meaning

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author avatar Ivyevelyn, R.S.A.
5th Jan 2012 (#)

Hello,1Faithmorgan. Pleased to meet you. You get the message across in your poem. Thank you.
(Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading).

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author avatar 1Faithmorgan
5th Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you Ivyevelyn :)

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author avatar Jules Castillo
5th Jan 2012 (#)

fight for what is right and fight to prove something....

you must be a strong one

next time you wont be taken for granted

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i can connect to the poem...

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author avatar 1Faithmorgan
6th Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you Cowboy :) and yes Im becoming a "strong one" lol

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author avatar XX=MAD_MAX=XX
6th Jan 2012 (#)

GREAT WORK FAITH!!!
*clap clap clap clap*
i love it! ^_^

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author avatar Buzz
6th Jan 2012 (#)

Wow, beautiful article, Faith. Hope to see more of your work. Great share.

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author avatar 1Faithmorgan
6th Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you

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author avatar Denise O
6th Jan 2012 (#)

We all have been taken advantage of, at least once in our lives. The trick is, to not allow that one time to stop us from putting ourselves out there again. In the chance it might happen again. Nice read. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar 1Faithmorgan
6th Jan 2012 (#)

Thanks Denise :)

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author avatar Songbird B
6th Jan 2012 (#)

Powerful message in poetic form Faith..A hard lesson to learn but many of us have been there..

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author avatar 1Faithmorgan
6th Jan 2012 (#)

Thank you song bird.

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author avatar Shaunak
6th Jan 2012 (#)

I especially love these kind of poem. And these words with the seamless integration across Paragraphs make it a very fine reading. Wonderful work. :)

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author avatar 1Faithmorgan
6th Jan 2012 (#)

Many thanks Shaunak. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
11th Feb 2013 (#)

Nice poem with excellent thought in fine form. Poetry, it is said, is best when it comes straight from the heart or through personal experience. Your poem was brilliant.

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