My blessing, your curse!

Funom Makama By Funom Makama, 3rd Jun 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2rvzmczm/
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Another Poem which came to me as a divine inspiration when I was planning the architecture of my manuscript which I am yet to decide if it would be a book or a movie.. The poem is about a victim of constant scorn. This person relates to their scorner, expressing their innocent thoughts and reactions of their already "fed-up" situation. This is a direct message to their tormentor. Enjoy it!

Something Laughable you really saw?

Where else do you want to mock me?
That my Sister is a Whore?
And she owns miserable men under her Lure?
Or is it that I have intense body Odour?

Maybe you will taunt the clothes I once wore
which you already tore.
So, what else is it? That I snore?
Or that a drunkard is my Family's Core?

Is there anything more?
Or something laughable you really saw?
Perhaps, you just realize I'm poor?
Please anymore flaws?

Never forget that I'm mere Human

If you're bitter, it isn't my fault
don't use me as the Salt on your wounds.
I know, I stimulate the stretching of your Catapult
and my smile makes you want to join a Cult

Even with the Insult,
never forget that I'm mere Human
who can halt; despite not giving a damn
just to make you understand
that I'm simply a friend.

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Blessing, Curse, Mock, Mourn, Scorn, Stretch, Trademark, Whore

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A medical Practitioner and a passionate writer. A proud published Author of 2 books, more than 2,000 articles online and 500 Poems!
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author avatar Retired
3rd Jun 2012 (#)

I like your poem, and how true it is!

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author avatar Lambasted
6th Jun 2012 (#)

Woow! So deep and true.. I wished you write a poem, illustrating how rough or crude or scornful the tormentor is...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Jun 2012 (#)

oh oh oh this is strong stuff Funom...well done..

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author avatar pretty_writer
6th Jun 2012 (#)

I totally agree with Lambasted. Be as nasty as you can.

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author avatar Funom Makama
3rd Jun 2012 (#)

thanks a lot friends

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author avatar Funom Makama
6th Jun 2012 (#)

Okay Lambasted and pretty Writer.. Thanks for your comments anyway... Here are two poems... You can pick from any of them....


YOU ARE THE VIRUS...
I call you the virus
possessing miget balls
dysfunctional and callous
ofcourse you're never like us
who taste everything delicious
Oh! Don't be malicious and vicious
you heated multiparous...

MY GAY FELLAS
Hello fellas,
Oh! You're Gay
Please make hay
While your asses lay
spreading your legs and paving the way
please cum fast one of you pray
as you corrupt yourselves
under the scorching sun in May..

FUNOM MAKAMA (C) 06.06. 2012.

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author avatar pretty_writer
6th Jun 2012 (#)

Oh Godness! Thumbs up to the second... But the first is definitely good.

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author avatar Lambasted
6th Jun 2012 (#)

calling a guy a "heated Multiparous" is indeed legendary.. So I take the first one. But the second is as well iconic.. Don't tell me you just formed these two poems some minutes ago Funom..

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author avatar Funom Makama
6th Jun 2012 (#)

Yes, I did. Thanks for the comments.

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