Never Give Up

Starr By Starr, 18th Nov 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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In life we must all understand and never give up on our dreams. The ones that fail the hardest are the ones that succeed and reach the farthest. No matter how difficult it might seem, there is always a way to keep pursuing your dream.

Never Give Up

A fragile broken boned individual
Lays lifeless in a chain
That’s suffocating the name
All seem to be in vain
Failure to success is a mere game
‘Your right but you won’t gain fame
You must fail until your failure is never the same’

How much more can you endure
Step at a time
I will make you weak
Step at a time
I will break all that you seek
For every step that seems to easy
You might not want to pick
The correct reason for your tick
That keeps you restless as you continue to seek

They scream, pain is endurance that leads to a fire
The fire that lead to a fight

Forgotten ones start to crawl to the finish line
As the proud and mirrored strong start to fall
The ones that crawl lay low
Every blow they take and start to walk slow
But push they do until their at the door

First knock, rejected
Second knock, rejected
But await they do until the tenth knock is accepted
They walk in and are broken to crawl yet again
But continue they do as proud and strong continue to fail

Further and further until all have lost
And they are left to stand
And walk up straight
For no one is around no more
They are the only ones left to adore
And they continue to fight further more.


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author avatar Buzz
19th Nov 2011 (#)

I love these memorable lines, Starr. Added to my FB.

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author avatar Denise O
21st Nov 2011 (#)

What a 'get me charged up' work of art. Well stated. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar Songbird B
13th Dec 2011 (#)

Perseverance always pays off if you can stand tall after all the knocks in life.. A powerful message Starr..

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