No Other Option

hestylim By hestylim, 12th Jan 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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That's why I bare this pain..
No matter how hurt it gets..
When I see you near to me..
But I can't hold you..
But I can't kiss you..
When you are so near to me..
But I can't even hold your hand..

It kills me..
But I have no other options...

No Other Option

I see you..
I smell your scent..
I can feel you next to me..
It hurts..

It hurts that I wanna cry..
However I hold this tears next to me..
It hurts that I wanna cry..
However I hold this tears back..
Try to be strong and keep smiling..

So that you won't know..
So that you won't feel..
So that you won't be afraid to stand next to me..
So that is why..
I don't want you to know..

It hurts..
To stand next to you..
So hurtful.. and very hurtful..
That I barely stand the pain..

However..
I can't be too far away from you..
I can't if I don't see your smile..
I can't if I don't see you..
I can't..

That's why I bare this pain..
No matter how hurt it gets..
When I see you near to me..
But I can't hold you..
But I can't kiss you..
Though you are so near to me..
But I can't even hold your hand..

It kills me..
But I have no other options...

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Bare, Cry, Hold, Hurt, Kiss, Near, Pain

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author avatar hestylim
Author of:
- Diaries of Catherine and Carl ~ First Journal
- First Poetry Collection ~ Love Isn't
http://www.hestylim.com

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author avatar RAMA KRISHNA.KOPPAKA
13th Jan 2011 (#)

you write with total involvement.I can certainly understand your dedication,attachment to your thoughts.You are really a blessed writer.Write,write,write for all of us,over here.

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author avatar hestylim
13th Jan 2011 (#)

@Rama : Thx a lot for your compliment... ^.^

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
14th Jan 2011 (#)

when you want somebody you cannot have, or who does not want you - it is painful - you have captured this well in your poem.

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author avatar hestylim
14th Jan 2011 (#)

thx Mark! ^.^

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author avatar Denise O
23rd Jan 2011 (#)

Very well written. I can feel the pain as I read through your poem. Just great writing my friend.
This will be my last comment on your lovely work for the next few weeks. I must take some much needed rest. I look forward to some of your new work when I return.
As always, thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar hestylim
23rd Jan 2011 (#)

Wow.. Thx for spending your last time reading on my work and commented it. I hope everything is going to be okay. Pray for you always.. ^-^

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