Not Alone

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 27th Oct 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/37pxdaga/
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No, darling, you are not alone. Somebody, out there, understands you.

Somebody Cares

When the life looks darker,
and you can't even breathe
from the heavy burden
you carry over your shoulders,
sometimes all you wanna do
is cry until your eyes
get tired of doing it.
The people you love
tries to make you
feel a bit better,
but any effort
is fruitless.
Your heart aches
every single time
you try to think
about all the stuff
you think you did wrong.
You try to clear
your mind away
from those messy thoughts,
yet, you can´t stop
thinking about them.
In those dark hours,
you might feel
as if you were so alone,
forgotten by all of those
supposed to love you.
But let me tell you
an interesting thing;
you are not alone.
Someone, somewhere
really understands
what you are going through.
Is not an easy thing to believe,
but if you open up your heart,
you might find a nice surprise.

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Alone, Hope, Loneliness, Lonely, Poem, Poem About Life, Prose, Prose Poetry, Prose-Poetry, Prosetry

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar Retired
28th Oct 2015 (#)

Yes, it's true there are so many people suffering from loneliness to the need of another human being, but I believe we are never alone,
because God is always with us. But having no human around is very sad. And many times, you have people around you, but still can feel lovely because we humans need love of another humans. Awesome poem!

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author avatar Retired
28th Oct 2015 (#)

Sorry typing error in the previous comment...... but still can feel lonely because we humans need the love of other humans. Awesome poem!

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
28th Oct 2015 (#)

tHank you very much for taking the time of reading my poem. comments like yours make worth keep writing.

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author avatar Retired
29th Oct 2015 (#)

You're welcome! And thank you also! Keep writing!

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
29th Oct 2015 (#)

Thanks again. I am humbled :)

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
29th Oct 2015 (#)

nice poem!

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