Oceanic tear drop!

Rathnashikamani By Rathnashikamani, 10th Apr 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Oceanic emotions I see in a tear drop!
The nature of a tear drop born out of strong emotions is unpredictable.
Sometimes any amount of consoling cannot pacify the strength of an emotion that shakes you with its vehemence.

Oceans in a tear of emotion!


A tear drop is not a simple water drop!
It's laden with huge emotional backdrop.

It grows unfathomable and unthinkable;
unimaginable and uninterpretable

Not unimportant but unutterable

Inexpressible and intelligibly
unintelligible and imperturbable

High-tiding tear trolls down on cheek
as the emotions ride on highest peak

Sob-twisted lips turn in uncontrollable
gesticulations of vacillations in diverse tiers.

Thumping heart pumps up the oceanic tears
welling out of volcanic swell of swirling spirits.

Vicious vile words make your intellect
verbatim vulnerable and daunted.

Vivid visions vibrate with vociferous images
varying in depth in vitreous vivisection.

Emotional oceans spill out as teardrops
kindling the hearts that do not prop.


Image credit: Click here to see the volcanic emotion By Sm313 at en.wikipedia , from Wikimedia Commons


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author avatar Denise O
2nd May 2011 (#)

Emotional oceans spill out as teardrops
kindling the hearts that do not prop.
I just love these last lines. You have captured exactly what one tear drops hold perfectly. Well done. As always, thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
2nd May 2011 (#)

Denise O,

Thank you for the compliments.

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author avatar Songbird B
2nd May 2011 (#)

Such imagery! A beautiful poem written in a descriptive style...Just lovely..

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
2nd May 2011 (#)

Songbird, thanks to you for the appreciation.

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author avatar jayababy
2nd May 2011 (#)

Tear has a hsitory. Great poem.

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author avatar Delicia Powers
2nd May 2011 (#)

Beautiful!

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author avatar mountainside
3rd May 2011 (#)

...What a strong, emotional poem. Well done.

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author avatar Dr.Vandana Hedaoo
3rd May 2011 (#)

Emotionally bathed poem....such an unexpressive emotions are expressed by you in a beautiful way...Thank you for this...

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author avatar Jenny Heart
3rd May 2011 (#)

I like the comment tears have a history a lot. well done!

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author avatar Retired
3rd May 2011 (#)

lovely!

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author avatar vpaulose
5th May 2011 (#)

Nice drop, Rathna!

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author avatar Andrew Morgan
8th May 2011 (#)

Awesome alliteration ;)

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author avatar Retired
14th May 2011 (#)

Potent theme of the power of a single tear--an expressive work with an awesome artistic abundance of alliteration. :)

Favorite lines-
Thumping heart pumps up the oceanic tears
welling out of volcanic swell of swirling spirits.

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author avatar Retired
13th Jun 2011 (#)

Wonderful work. Thanks!

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