Ode To Carolina Nathan, AKA CNWriter

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I would like to pay tribute to a very prominent star and distinguished writer of Wikinut. She's an all rounder. See her profile page. She's a dearest friend I love!

Carolina On My mind

She's the daughter of the sun
and under her scorching rays
am I tastefully fried and ablaze.

She's the mother of my moon,
blue streak she exudes, the stars
she eclipses so radiantly.

She is my star deviant like no
sparkling firmament can tease
and in no way hope my malaise.

The Star, The Seer And The Poet

Her words, my Carolina's, her
spell cast mine heart a stone,
hear me squeal enchantment.

Her tongue, oh, how it resembles
mine! Like in bees their honey
melts in sting behind they bring!

Yet the Carolina who knows the
mind her potions the constellation
mix I will unchaste your lips I kiss.

Dame Carolan: I Bow And Curtsy

Blurry will be the eyes of modesty
when the prism intervenes to
display the magic of us entwined.

So will you be, teary-eyed, as I am,
if I disrobe you and see the intimate
longings that mirrors your speech,
your density, your void, your love,

And how like the phoenix we rose
from the ashes again one scarred
into two ablaze, always a twin in love.
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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
14th Nov 2012 (#)

Great tribute to one of Wikinut's terrific writers.

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Thanks, Mark, for giving this a star, brief as it is, and for the comment.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Nov 2012 (#)

wow...am utterly wowed...thank you so much Buzz for honouring me so and thank you Mark for your comment..also honouring me..am quite speechless...

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

It's my pleasure, dear Carolina.

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author avatar Teila
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Very nice!

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Thanks very much, Teila.

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author avatar Clarence Schreiber
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Excellent tribute to cnwriter there Buzz with a star to show for it.

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Great tribute to a magnificent lady and a superb writer. Well done Buzz.

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

She deserves it, Steve. Thanks for the appreciation.

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

I greatly appreciate your comment, my friend Clarence.

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
15th Nov 2012 (#)

With flows of lines that a story to tell,
Gift of narration between heaven and hell.
With anthem of inspiration that bring a vibe,
Which brings inspiration I can't describe.

I feel the passion deep within soul,
She brings two halves and makes them whole.
Reuniting the lovers from the stormy past,
In moments so cosmic that are meant to last.

She is the passion that shows us all,
With the Cosmic vibrations the climbs and falls.
That tells a tale to pay that debt,
Its the anthem of life created with no regret.

She is brilliant in the star of her kind,
One of the best that one can find.
She has the passion that enlightens the soul,
Creation dimensions that make them whole.

By Anisha Achankunju (C) Lady Aiyanna 15th November 2012

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Those are apt lines for Cn, and you couldn't have said it better, Anisha. Thanks.

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author avatar Md Rezaul Karim
15th Nov 2012 (#)

I vote for you Buzz, No doubt she is astonishingly brilliant and have patience to make the articles magnificent. Buzz did a great task...

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Indeed she is brilliant, my friend. Thanks the wonderful comment and compliment.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Well said, dear Buzz. Lovely and heartfelt tribute to our dear friend and inspiration. Carolina is bold in stringing her words, adding vivid pictures and videos that leave nothing to imagination! She really adds color to this wonderful site, a unique talent - siva

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Yep, siva_ji, loverly woman she is.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Nov 2012 (#)

oh Siva how wonderful your words as all of you honour me and Buzz...namste

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author avatar David Reinstein,LCSW
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Methinks thou mayst be smitten, sir :-}

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Not so, dear sir. She's ever so wonderful.:-)

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author avatar Christine Crowley
15th Nov 2012 (#)

What a lovely tribute. Very well done, Buzz!

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author avatar Buzz
15th Nov 2012 (#)

Thanks, Christine. Love you.

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author avatar mistyleaf
16th Nov 2012 (#)

Such a lovely poem! Well said and well done Brod! Am proud of you.

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author avatar Buzz
16th Nov 2012 (#)

Thanks, sis. Proud of you, too!

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author avatar Carol
21st Nov 2012 (#)

oh what a lovely tribute Buzz! How cherished she must feel!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
22nd Nov 2012 (#)

Yes Carol I truly do and honoured as well...

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author avatar Buzz
21st Nov 2012 (#)

Oh, she does, Carol. Thanks for your lovely comment. Take care.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
22nd Nov 2012 (#)

Buzz where can I find your recent pages? am missing your inner and outer wisdoms....

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author avatar Buzz
23rd Nov 2012 (#)

I will publish tonight, dear.:)

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author avatar Judy Ellen
25th Nov 2012 (#)

Great ode Buzz! You are a great poet too! Yes, your Carolina is beautiful inside and outside!

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author avatar Buzz
25th Nov 2012 (#)

I appreciate your comment very much, Judy. Thanks again.

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author avatar Teila
29th Dec 2012 (#)

Always good to see your posts! Here is a toast, to a wonderful New Year ahead of you!!!!!

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author avatar Buzz
29th Dec 2012 (#)

Thanks, Teila. Happy New Year to you and your family!

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author avatar Retired
31st Dec 2012 (#)

this is awonderful dedication to a pretty dame

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author avatar Buzz
31st Dec 2012 (#)

Thanks, WF. Happy New Year to all!

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author avatar Djbrat
25th Mar 2013 (#)

Wow, a great tribute to a wonderful lady ♥

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author avatar Buzz
25th May 2013 (#)

Thanks, Djbrat!

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