Of Broken Sonnets and Black Roses

Marcus Writes By Marcus Writes, 19th Nov 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/osyfc4cw/
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He had a choice; but he chose to break her heart.
She had a choice; but she chose to let him.

Stage 1

I have witnessed numerous relationships with promising future. It started with white, red roses, kisses and chocolates. Days are blossoming like leaves and flowers at spring. Partners are like love birds cage in a fantasy like love affairs. Mornings are filled with sweet messages, laughter and cuddles. At midday, plans for the night are made without reservations. And at night, the dark skies are decorated with stars and romance filled the atmosphere with warmth and non explainable joy.

Stage 2

Circumstances made a call. One must live away for work, for dreams or for better life. Distance and timeline were not on their side. Communications are made like a climb on a hill or a trip to a dark forest—full of thorns and obstacles. Doubts started to smell pungent and trust is starting to crack like iced lake waters on the end of winter.

Stage 3

Arguments are thrown like punches—deep and painful. Betrayal came in the picture like oil spilled on a canvass. One broke the code of the sort-of love cage and made an unlikely triangle. Cheating, contempt, and tons of arguments poured like rain brought by thunderstorms. Blaming was part of the game and insult reach heavens. They were angry, angrier of the fate both of them have chosen. They were victims. No, there were not victims. They are culprits acting victims. She cut the ties. He ended the story. Roses turned black.

Stage 4

The missing process took over. Souls reconsider chances (the nth chance). Nothing much happened.

Stage 5 (Final Stage)

Crossing path again with one another is the theme. They took a glance and suddenly ignited some past romance. They forgot what had happened. They choose to endure past pains. And just like that they reunited like fools. The cycle and stages spin like wheel—recurring on the same instance at some point of their lives. Loving. Hurting. Relvoving. Hurting and so on…

One Last Thought

The connection was like a broken sonnet full of dramas yet undone. It was beautifully written but realistically absurd. People can’t just hurt people after making them feel complete. And just like a black rose, the nature ceases to define its beauty. In the end, it is just a black rose and a broken sonnet.

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Cheating, Forgiveness, Life, Love, Pain, Relationship Problems, Relationships, Relationships Love

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
19th Nov 2015 (#)

Do you know what the order of the Black Rose is??? Check it, it is from the dark side of spiritual life.
Relationships fail because you made a choice to make it fail. There is always one who is a victim and the other the triumphant, in mine, the husband was the triumphant although I walked out with my child and kicked him out with never to return again although we are still married legally.
And nope, he has never given me a rose or a flower in 16 years of relationship, chocolates yes, flowers never although I craved to hold just one in my life, always got it from a stranger and never the husband. And just the flower not sex as this has to be clarified with the perverts of todays society.

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
19th Nov 2015 (#)

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=order%20of%20the%20black%20rose

http://alchemyguild.memberlodge.org/page-311919

http://www.wicca-spirituality.com/goddess-symbols.html

Good luck. I not any of these but learnt my life in this world of non-confidentiality and decided to throw the reality to the face of people.

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author avatar Marcus Writes
19th Nov 2015 (#)

Hi!

The Black Rose is a metaphor to a dead relationship. I am not trying to convey an occult or dark practice here. I am just trying to be poetic. Ok?

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author avatar SaigonDeManila
22nd Nov 2015 (#)

Great read! Nice to see you thriving here and found your mojo writing again...am quite busy lately amd can't even complete my drafts hahaha meantime wag masyado pnsnin yan maepal na kumenro sataas.. godapeed Maecus!......

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