Oh! (Sweet Feeling)

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 3rd Jan 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3224i7cp/
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This short poem makes reference to a gentle feeling, something so small, and yet, capable to change ones life.

Oh, love!

Just an universal prayer; one-thousand hearts pleading to feel, even only for a while, one of the most glorious feelings, one that goes beyond a simple kiss or an small touch.
Oh, sweet feeling of pure love,
Please, be a never-ending love,
To help the lonely hearts
Before the long night starts.
Please, gentle feeling of sweet love,
Please, be a never-ending love.
To light up the dark path
Of those drowning into an abyss filled with wrath.
Oh! Miraculous drop of love,
Gentle fountain of warm love,
Don´t leave us here, so alone,
Wandering into the unknown.
So, please, please, love,
Sublime expression of the universal love,
Keep taking care of all of us,
The kids that got lost into a nowhere-going bus.
We are still here, living in the dark,
Waiting patiently of a gentle spark
To ignite a luminous ray of light
To save us from the never-ending night.
We, the human beings, need you,
To know what we got to do,
To find a new meaning on life;
And forget any trace of strife.
Oh, sweet feeling of the purest love,
We are waiting for you to arrive, love.
Our hearts are starting to get hungry
For a happiness that goes beyond money,
For a spark of light to keep us alive,
Remanding us of our will to survie.

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author avatar Deepizzaguy
4th Jan 2015 (#)

The power of positive words in a poem is always helpful.

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author avatar viewgreen
4th Jan 2015 (#)

Wonderful article and thank you for sharing this great poem.

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
4th Jan 2015 (#)

Thank you for reading this little poem

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author avatar colouringstars♥
5th Jan 2015 (#)

nice poem purpletears

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
5th Jan 2015 (#)

Glad you liked it!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
6th Jan 2015 (#)

Great poetry and congratulations on being author of the day.

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
6th Jan 2015 (#)

Thanks for reading! I am humbled

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author avatar Denise O
6th Jan 2015 (#)

Your words have touched my heart in so many ways, just lovely. Thank you for sharing. :)

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