Ole man in the sea

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Ole man in the sea This is a unique attempt at composing poetry at the level of two genre Hope it meets with your level

Ole man in the sea


Ole man in the sea

Wise eyes
discern from a distance
we see the distant horizon
vast deep beyond
the expanding ocean
we linger in space indeed
to find a swift weed

as we surf along the waves of life
a tsunami comes astride
takes all humanity for a ride
none know where to hide
then we subside
to the bottom of the sea
just who are we?

none can see
a drop of water
bubbles mixed
in the waters of the ocean
all transfixed
as globules independent

once we were,
but now a nuisance


teach me
the art of roving imagination
whence comes a thought
whither does it go to

no one knows

whether we can imprint
our minds indelible ink
let me know
the world says so

two souls so distant apart
Internet now makes them
an integral part


your wisdom far surpasses the sea
the rivers do meet
but at the tributary
of what we call conjunction of humanity
to merge with eternity


my mind races faster
than does my finger
thoughts continue to linger

it's the vibrations
of thoughts

which causes commotion
hence helps to keep life
in slower motion
as poetry is nothing
beyond an emotion
but in slower motion


tomorrow when it comes,
as it will
a new tree of poetry
will become an envy
when these verses
will be given a soul
of which master of inspiration
are you all whole


I am just an instrument of divine
making an effort to poetry refine
out of an experienced find
yours not mine,
none should that now mind..
.

My voice is not that of a nightingale
it’s just like that of a big big whale
words monumental
but meanings small
come out like beads
from sea beds weeds
yet I pose
as being poetic Rose.
...

Let someone all beads string
and seal
then someone someday will say
these were songs of a
real nightingale


any way it’s been a long day
again today
awaiting your grace so to say
as you sow words of wisdom
in a kaleidoscope of thoughts random
a word or two

I shall borrow from you


hope this poetry would do.

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Old, Old Age, Old Friends, Old Man, Old People, Old Woman, Older, Sea, Seashells, Season, Seasonal, Seasons

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author avatar LOVERME
23rd Sep 2014 (#)

A non star deserving poetry

we all know it
as it doesn't meet basic ingredients
..three this and two that

But do read it
as if it's Starry please..

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
24th Sep 2014 (#)

Thought provoking, taking our mind and imagination through the gamut of an all inclusive ride. Nothing more need be said! A great and inspiring poem my friend - siva

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author avatar LOVERME
24th Sep 2014 (#)

Thank u so much milord

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author avatar Delicia Powers
24th Sep 2014 (#)

LOVERME-your poem is a rose of profound beauty and thought ...I picture in my mind's eye cyber space as a sea of searching souls- so your very creative poem spoke to me in a very real and deeply meaningful way... LOVERME outstanding!

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author avatar LOVERME
24th Sep 2014 (#)

You all give me the
..Inspiration ..
as I stand out
you ..
all are more ..OUTSTANDING no doubt
...Thanks ma'am
GRATEFUL

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author avatar Utah Jay
25th Sep 2014 (#)

I don't know where the thoughts go...What were we talking about?
Nice work.

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author avatar LOVERME
25th Sep 2014 (#)

all jumbled up eh!

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author avatar LOVERME
6th Oct 2016 (#)

Ole man in the sea

Wise eyes
discern from a distance
we see the distant horizon
vast deep beyond
the expanding ocean
we linger in space indeed
to find a swift weed

as we surf along the waves of life
a tsunami comes astride
takes all humanity for a ride
none know where to hide
then we subside
to the bottom of the sea
just who are we?

none can see
a drop of water
bubbles mixed
in the waters of the ocean
all transfixed
as globules independent

once we were,
but now a nuisance

teach me
the art of roving imagination
whence comes a thought
whither does it go to
no one knows

whether we can imprint
our minds indelible ink
let me know
the world says so

two souls so distant apart
Internet now makes them
an integral part


your wisdom far surpasses the sea
the rivers do meet
but at the tributary
of what we call conjunction of humanity
to merge with eternity

my mind races faster
than does my finger
thoughts continue to linger

it's the vibrations
of thoughts
which causes commotion
hence helps to keep life
in slower motion
as poetry is nothing
beyond an emotion
but in slower motion

tomorrow when it comes,
as it will
a new tree of poetry
will become an envy
when these verses
will be given a soul
of which master of inspiration
are you all whole

I am just an instrument of divine
making an effort to poetry refine
out of an experienced find
yours not mine,
none should that now mind...

My voice is not that of a nightingale
it’s just like that of a big big whale
words monumental
but meanings small
come out like beads
from sea beds weeds
yet I pose
as being poetic Rose....

Let someone all beads string
and seal
then someone someday will say
these were songs of a
real nightingale

any way it’s been a long day
again today
awaiting your grace so to say
as you sow words of wisdom
in a kaleidoscope of thoughts random
a word or two
I shall borrow from you


hope this poetry would do.

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author avatar LOVERME
7th Sep 2019 (#)

1093
Ole man in the sea This is a unique attempt at composing poetry at the level of two genre Hope it meets with your level

Ole man in the sea
the sea looka a lake taken by me
the sea looka a lake taken by me

Ole man in the sea

Wise eyes
discern from a distance
we see the distant horizon
vast deep beyond
the expanding ocean
we linger in space indeed
to find a swift weed

as we surf along the waves of life
a tsunami comes astride
takes all humanity for a ride
none know where to hide
then we subside
to the bottom of the sea
just who are we?

none can see
a drop of water
bubbles mixed
in the waters of the ocean
all transfixed
as globules independent

once we were,
but now a nuisance

teach me
the art of roving imagination
whence comes a thought
whither does it go to
no one knows

whether we can imprint
our minds indelible ink
let me know
the world says so

two souls so distant apart
Internet now makes them
an integral part


your wisdom far surpasses the sea
the rivers do meet
but at the tributary
of what we call conjunction of humanity
to merge with eternity

my mind races faster
than does my finger
thoughts continue to linger

it's the vibrations
of thoughts
which causes commotion
hence helps to keep life
in slower motion
as poetry is nothing
beyond an emotion
but in slower motion

tomorrow when it comes,
as it will
a new tree of poetry
will become an envy
when these verses
will be given a soul
of which master of inspiration
are you all whole

I am just an instrument of divine
making an effort to poetry refine
out of an experienced find
yours not mine,
none should that now mind...

My voice is not that of a nightingale
it’s just like that of a big big whale
words monumental
but meanings small
come out like beads
from sea beds weeds
yet I pose
as being poetic Rose....

Let someone all beads string
and seal
then someone someday will say
these were songs of a
real nightingale

any way it’s been a long day
again today
awaiting your grace so to say
as you sow words of wisdom
in a kaleidoscope of thoughts random
a word or two
I shall borrow from you
hope this poetry would do.

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