On Broken Friendship

rapuncille By rapuncille, 26th May 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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A poem regarding disappointments, broken friendships and burning bridges.

To Ex Dear from Ms. Fed Up

When you were down,
I was there to pick you up.
When you cried for help,
I hurriedly reached out.

While you were drowning,
I bravely dived in.
But when it was me who was sinking,
“Where have you been?”

You said, i should know,
I can count on you.
But to where you are now,
I have no clue.

Looks like you’re just there,
Whenever you need me;
Sucking what is only good,
and the patience left of me.

You told me you’re a friend,
But really, you are not.
Let’s stop pretending,
I know what you are after at.

If you are really a friend,
You won’t make me feel like this.
You know with you,
I am really pissed.

I don’t know why,
I end up with cries.
Maybe I am fed up,
With your so many lies.

To you my ex-dear,
I would like to say goodbye.
Wasn’t able to foresee this coming,
Oh no! Not on our first “hi!”.


Broken, Burning Bridges, Disappointments, Failure, Friendship, Goodbyes, Relationship

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author avatar rapuncille

am a full-time mom to two gorgeous boys. I spend most of my spare time in between my mommy and wifey jobs doing online stuff which includes writing.

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author avatar Jlyn11
27th May 2011 (#)

Wow, you must be very angry when you wrote this, hehe!

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author avatar rapuncille
27th May 2011 (#)

hahaha... it has nothing to do with my personal circumstance. I somehow just thought of the words out of boredom and wrote them down. They came from my old notes in college. I just had the stanzas rehashed to come up with this. :p

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